Reviews for Undiscovered Exhibition
LostInMe chapter 1 . 12/6/2008
That's pretty good!
Isca chapter 1 . 12/4/2008
"Morning broke upon her shoulders." Awesome opening line! I like the feeling of this line. It makes me think that the weight of the world is on this person's shoulders.

"Giddy-glitter fragments." Vivid!

"So she danced." I liked how that was a line on its own. It connected back to the previous stanza in a really powerful way. The stanza after that line is PHENOMENAL. It's so mature and sophisticated!

"...turned against the tide..." Beautiful! Sad!

"She tore herself apart." OH MY GOD! That line is so intense! :D