|Reviews for Inverse Distillation|
| LostInMe chapter 1 . 12/6/2008
Again, good work.
| Isca chapter 1 . 12/4/2008
"As her scars rise up in perfect lines." Amazing imagery!
"This endless sea of sameness." That was a very creative way to express routines and boredom.
"Cataclysmic chaos." Great consonance!
I like how you used inhibition-exhibition in the third stanza and addict-attic in the fourth stanza. Very suave.
| Grains and Oats chapter 1 . 12/4/2008
Well...what's there to say really? It's a beautiful piece, and it drew me in so that I was disappointed that she's typical. I like how you used "addict" and "attic" in the first two lines of the second to last stanza. Maybe it was unintentional, I don't know, but it seemed to me like you were going to run with a scheme like that. Perhaps it's not such a bad idea if you do, in the future?
Sorry this review is crap.