Reviews for Accidental Truthlessness
LostInMe chapter 1 . 12/6/2008
Do you ever do rhyming poems? You're a talented writer, and I'd like to see how one of those would turn out.
Isca chapter 1 . 12/5/2008
First, your recent poetry is wonderful (not that your older poetry is beautiful)!

"Gurgles bare apologies." God, I could almost feel myself choking, gasping for air, etc. Very well done!

"But, her smile never falters." Beautiful! :)

"Her lungs are brimming over with crimson wax." Incredible imagery! Haunting! Chilling!

"And now she drowns." Sorrowful! Emotional!

I'm in awe. Amazing work.