Do you ever do rhyming poems? You're a talented writer, and I'd like to see how one of those would turn out.

First, your recent poetry is wonderful (not that your older poetry is beautiful)!

"Gurgles bare apologies." God, I could almost feel myself choking, gasping for air, etc. Very well done!

"But, her smile never falters." Beautiful! :)

"Her lungs are brimming over with crimson wax." Incredible imagery! Haunting! Chilling!

"And now she drowns." Sorrowful! Emotional!

I'm in awe. Amazing work.

-Isca