Reviews for The Inexplicable State of Being There
GoNe RoGuE chapter 20 . 9/7/2011
That was so good! Like really, I love artist they are so talented and can create something passionate when they get bored! Awesome! I love how you didn't from the beginning force them to date like every other story! Love how you waited it out and little by little made it apparent that they liked each other! And I love her relationship with Micki! Can't wait to read more of your stories! Keep writing you have fabulous talent that should be shared with the *entire* world!

GoNe RoGuE chapter 7 . 9/5/2011
Superly like this story it's so unique and I love how your not rushing them into a relationship!
Zippy chapter 20 . 9/2/2011
N'aaaaaaw. That was great! I loved all of your characters. Thanks for the ride. :) You're a great writer and I'm going to go and check out some of your other work now. :D Much love, Zippy.
Zippy chapter 15 . 9/2/2011
. How cute is Brody? :)
cookie luv chapter 20 . 8/20/2011
this story is absolutely amazing. i think its really well put and stuff and it was really cute and i just completely loved it! keep going plz...
daisyjustfailed chapter 1 . 8/16/2011
great story... seriously

i loooooved it so much!

super absolutely well written and really really sweet, and funny, and with lots of personality

i actually fell in love with every single character:)
KristenWenst68 chapter 1 . 8/16/2011
I read the whole thing in one day! ok, i know pple probs say this alot, but u shuld write a sequel!
wildyoungthings chapter 1 . 7/31/2011
Just from reading the first chapter, I am seriously drawn in by the different POVs and the character voices - very easygoing, very nice to listen to, and just all around a pleasant story with an interesting... circumstance. Good job on the grammar, which I haven't caught any mistakes, and the characters, for me at least, are solidified in the very first chapter: distinct and interesting and people that I would probably like to meet. Especially Brody... ;)
Samanthaaa chapter 13 . 7/29/2011
I had to fight my OCD in order to do this, but it's 2:05 AM, and I'm scarily obsessed with your story. It's incredible, the plot is amazing, and I just want to reach through the screen and shove Felicia and Brody into a room, take off the door handle and start screaming, "YOU ARE NOT COMING OUT OF THAT ROOM UNTIL YOU FIGURE OUT THIS RELATIONSHIP, WRITE IT DOWN, AND THEN SLID THE PAPER UNDER THE DOOR." Why yes, I did steal that from How I Met Your Mother. Anyways, just want to say what an honor it is to be the 1,000th reviewer. Love this 3
fariswheel chapter 20 . 7/29/2011
That ending wasn't cheesy! It was absolutely perfect for the fic, and I love d every minute of it! Brody is absolutely wonderful, and Felicia is awesome and oh my God those sketches you described were amazing and I love Micki and wow, you're awesome. I think I've had too much sugar.
fariswheel chapter 13 . 7/29/2011
Micki is seriously obsessed with gays guys. Although, I wish I had a gay friend too. Its depressing.
44musicfreak44 chapter 20 . 7/27/2011
This was an amazing story, Fantastic!
Queen Midnight chapter 20 . 7/6/2011
One word...FANTASTIC! It had a great plot and storyline. The characters actions and personality where perfect for each part and you made events that kept prolonging them being together so you'd always question what would happen next. My favorite was when she asked him which painting won and it was the one with him giving her the hearts necklace. It was the perfect picture to use for winning. The ending was really good too. Great for the storyline. The summary that you first read was great too. It really catches the readers interest. The only thing I would change or not crazy about is how you kinda started the story. You have it as if you're writing an essay. But then you start actually writing a story. That's my only thing I only concern. Wonderful story! Keep on writing. Never give it up!
Alanisaur chapter 1 . 6/29/2011
Love this! :)
Daneeno chapter 1 . 6/28/2011
This story is one of my top ten faves. It's so sweet and romantic,I am in love with it.
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