|Reviews for The Inexplicable State of Being There|
| Yabu chapter 8 . 8/5/2014
I'm really enjoying this story! Your writing style is gripping and very easy to relate to - can't wait to keep reading! :D
P.S. One thing, maybe i'm being stupid but, what does 'oy vey' mean?
| ajashire1 chapter 20 . 8/4/2014
I can't top a 1,000 views so if you're going to understand any of my feelings toward your story you best understand this: I read this book like I was watching a movie and you better damn well appreciate it. Thanks sweetheart. :3
| flanerie chapter 20 . 7/18/2014
That was ADORABLE. I feel like the personalities of the characters, particularly Brody and Felicia, developed with each chapter as well. The writing just kept getting better and better. I had some issues with the mildly racist comments, and I found that whilst there was nothing homophobic about the story, some of the reactions to the sexuality of characters was a bit off-putting. Nevertheless, brilliantly written, adorable plot. Nice slow build, as opposed to insta-love.
| badbart chapter 20 . 1/26/2014
My only purpose for reviewing is to feed the review whore, not because I thoroughly enjoyed the story, nor because it make me laugh too much or anything else.
| mimster259 chapter 20 . 12/30/2013
How do you review something that's been reviewed over 1,000 other times?! You could say that you throughly enjoyed it, but that's probably been said at least 700 other times. You could go on and on about how much if an amazing writer you are, but that's also a very cliched review. So I'm just going to say that, you can tell you put a lot of heart and soul into this piece of literature, much like Brody's artwork, and I'm going to read every other story you ever wrote on this site.
| daisukiklove chapter 7 . 11/28/2013
I Love how the story is so easy to read and on-the-edge, like there are some really good fictions out there, but it's kinda hard for me to keep reading continously(If u know why I mean) really good
| daisukiklove chapter 4 . 11/28/2013
I can't read the Spanish. Can your do like a translation on the side? Well srry if I can only read English, Vietnamese, Japanese, & like 10 words in Korean... Wish I took spanish
| daisukiklove chapter 2 . 11/28/2013
Cute he so likes her
| Guest chapter 20 . 11/11/2013
luv it hun 3
| A Writer's Dilemma chapter 1 . 11/7/2013
Interesting start, love that Harry Potter was thrown in here too.
| SunnySideUp26 chapter 20 . 10/1/2013
WOW! I am soooo glad I found this story! It is truly amazing, and you're such a great writer. I loved everything about this story, and I was sad when it ended. Wonderful work :)
| AlwaysThere chapter 13 . 9/10/2013
I love that last line! " You look at her like a masterpiece, like she's priceless to you." Awwwww :)
| SecondsTillWakingHour chapter 1 . 8/21/2013
Interesting story line so far, I have no idea what is going to happen and I like that.
| Marguerite Grimmett chapter 20 . 7/23/2013
Wow... Sorry for not reviewing the other chapters, but I couldn't wait to get to the next one. :) this story was AWESOME! I love how you portrayed the emotions, and the fact that Felicia and Brody both didn't really realize that the two were in love with each other. Also, adding Brody as an artist makes him more interesting, not to mention a bit more words for the competition. Haha. I also really love Felicia's little odd obsessions, like kiwi, and it adds a touch of humor because everyone thinks it's so strange. Also, Micki's such an interesting character... Too bad she and Nick didn't get together. Br anyway, this is a great story, love it!
| fyriagita chapter 20 . 7/10/2013
I love how you write your story. and i absolutely love the character interaction!
Thank you for making it :D