Reviews for The Inexplicable State of Being There
Narq chapter 9 . 1/15/2009
WOWOWOWOWOW! This was one fantastic chapter! Felicia is endangered! Poor Brody is heart broken! OMG How can it get any better?


Izzey chapter 9 . 1/15/2009
what's he gonna do? he can't keep her safe. well, maybe he can. i don't know. anyways, please update again asap!
forever.ephemeral chapter 9 . 1/15/2009
wow. great chapter! :))
Mary Chrys chapter 9 . 1/15/2009
Oh. my. gawd.
insanity-ward chapter 9 . 1/15/2009
woah. finally! amazingly wicked awesome chapter! j'ai l'aimé! absolutely fantastic! i really can't wait til the next one! and they really do take this list thing seriously. wow. wel update soon! ]
kelse-a-bells chapter 9 . 1/15/2009
I can totally relate to what Micki said about bisexuality. I'm not going to think that what your write will affect your sexuality, because I know that it hasn't affected me. What I write is just what's easiest for me to write.

Anyway, in ninth grade, I identified myself as bisexual, and I think that it just took a while, before I realized that I was lesbian. Anywho...

Yay! Ashley broke up with Brody. But, at first, I thought she was going to say that she was pregnant. _

And, I think that Cameron might be gay. The fact that you wrote that Micki thinks that, made me think that maybe Cameron is simply a character for Felicia before Brody and her get together.

And I hope that Brody protects her.

Keep up the great work!


Has A WaywithWords chapter 9 . 1/15/2009
Good. A few mistakes though...
goanywhere chapter 9 . 1/15/2009
does brody care for her enough to help her?

that's what i'm wondering.

but anyways.

this was really good.

you MUST update soon!
MySweetFears chapter 8 . 1/13/2009
very funny chap. i feel so sorry for ash with her parents like that. we all know how that feels. cant wait for ash nd brody break up though. its just not meant to be
Maggie chapter 8 . 1/13/2009
This. Story. Is. Awesome. Can't wait for the next chapter! Micki and Nick would be so cute together, you seriously should do another story about them.
SRC-SI chapter 8 . 1/13/2009
OMG u have got to update fast!

i cant wait for more of ur story!

i love it...and i cant believe ittis onli 8 chapters long...i tend to like stories with more than 15 chapters...this is the first i think...

anyways keep writing and update soon!
FantasyFan5 chapter 8 . 1/12/2009

I absolutely freaking love this story.

I was so sad when I got to the end of this chapter because I went to click for the next one and was sad to see - THERE WAS NO NEW CHAPTER! NO! That was very, extremely depressing. So please post more, to help my new addiction.

Really, though. Your characters are well rounded and not too perfect (as some people's tend to be), your plot is engaging, and you definitely make people want to keep reading. Keep this up and you'll have TWO hundred in no time, trust me.

meowza chapter 8 . 1/12/2009
Gah. I hate Ashley. Stupid slut. D:

wow. okay, sorry. haha. anyway...

LOVELY update. here's to hoping the next chapter comes soon!
mysignisvital chapter 8 . 1/12/2009
I really like this (:

It's a great idea and I'll be looking out for the next chapter.
kelse-a-bells chapter 8 . 1/12/2009
So...Brody's main reason for not fucking Ashley is so that they can lose their virginity together.

-Brings out pitchfork-

Die, bitch, die!


Just kidding. I think she's a cool character.

I want more, hun.


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