|Reviews for The Inexplicable State of Being There|
| insanity-ward chapter 8 . 1/11/2009
oh my. wicked chapter! absolutely LOVED it!...
and holy shit. the ending killed me... again... "No, you idiots [we are not idiots, just hopeless romantics with nothing better to do with our lives... ok fine, we're idiots], i didn't like Felicia. NOT THEN." HOLY SHIT! "not then"? does that mean that he didn't like her then but will grow to like her? THERE'S HOPE!
THIS JUST KEEPS BETTER AND BETTER! sweet. i luv the hints you drop in P
and that was so sweet of him! to not have sex with Ashley because of Felicia, lol. kk well, update soon! ]
| Only4Miken chapter 8 . 1/11/2009
Brody is one strange guy or maybe all the guys that I know are just sex addicts, I don't know. I feel like that him not having any feeling for Felicia is a bunch of bull crap. He has to have feelings...somewhere but if he doesn't then he's a ridiculously sweet guy thinking of how his sex live would effect his friend even if part of it is for selfish reasons.
I would love to read a story about Nick and Micki. They are fantastic. I love this story and can't wait to read more.
| namethegame chapter 1 . 1/11/2009
Just there. Oh man, this is a good beginning-an interesting beginning. I don't read many stories like this: cliche boy next door thing always going? I like this twist. I really do.
| D R O P D E A D D A N I E L chapter 1 . 1/11/2009
hm.. first chapter's nice.
had a few typos though.
you have a beta?
| Alora The Sleepy chapter 8 . 1/11/2009
I would totally read a Nick/Micki story. But may I just say that Ash/Brody are boring. I like the idea of Brody pining over Felicia while she dates Cameron. D I'm so antagonistic. But I have to go (short review again, I know, I'm sorry!) because I'm being anti-social because we're actually having a dinner party right now.
So: love it, update soon, uhm... OH! And in reply to your reply to my last review: Have you seen the picture of Patrick in the 'Folie A Duex' booklet/poster thing? He looks quite adorable there too. And he's wearing a hat that looks EXACTLY the same to one that I OWN. (Pretty fricken cool if you ask me!) And I totally know what you mean about his voice. It was half the reason I even fell in love with Fall Out Boy. And yes, Brendon and William have droolworthy voices. As do Andrew McMahon, Gabe Sapora (SP?) and Alex Gaskarth. D
OK, I'm really going now. D
| Mary Chrys chapter 8 . 1/11/2009
I think it's funny how, when Brody is about to pocket Ashley's virginity, he's more worried about Felicia's virginity than he is Ashley's. I think they should break up soon. But they should have sex first, because then Felicia'll be number one, and it'll be interesting to see what happens. (
Also, I don't really like the name Felicia. I mean, I'm sure there are plenty of perfectly okay Felicias out there, but Felicia seems like a jerk name, and that is one thing Felicia isn't.
And now I have officially helped the review cause.
| goanywhere chapter 8 . 1/11/2009
It's kinda weird he thought about Felicia.
But it's nice that he's thinking about her.
| White Rabbit Tale chapter 8 . 1/11/2009
Another fantastic chapter. Brody is becoming more and more loveable with every chapter. And Micki is definitely one of my favorite characters. The list right now goes Felicia, Brody, Nick, Micki, Ashley. Yeah, I like Ashley a lot, she seems like a pretty awesome girlfriend. But the chemistry between Brody and Felicia is just so much better.
Thanks for the chapter update! Today is my birthday so it felt like a birthday present. )
| forever.ephemeral chapter 8 . 1/11/2009
interesting story so far. i happened to open my mail the minute that you updated. haha...
...i guess ashley's okay, but i'm not sure if i like that she's with brody. but then again, i'm just waiting for when brody and felicia get together. :)
| Howling Cat chapter 7 . 1/6/2009
I. Love. This.
Normally I don't read het but this pulled me in from the summary to the first paragraph, all the way to chapter seven. I adore Christian and Cameron and Felicia and Brody too, and Micki and...jeez, basically everyone. Except for Ashley. And Liam. Christian is hella cool, by the way.
| Alora The Sleepy chapter 7 . 1/4/2009
OK, I think I love Christian and Cameron more than I love Brody. Which is probably really bad, considering Brody's the main guy. And it's usually the main GIRL that I don't like. I swear, you're a genius. You like... discovered a way to make me like other characters more than the major love interest. WHAT is HAPPENING to the WORLD? Yeah, OK, I'm going insane. D
SOO. Cameron is perfect. That's all I have to say on the matter. Oh, except that in his little list of people Petie had at home he forgot Hemmingway and Rigby. I have an issue with that. Before Ash and Bronx (perfect description, by the way - I loved it), Hemmingway was the only significant other in his life. D Yeah, Cameron isn't the only one with an unhealthy obsession for Fall Out Boy. Except I would have been able to bring the bass (not that I would have) because I... well, play is a loose term. But I can play 'Dance, Dance'. When I meet Fall Out Boy in February I'm gona tll Pete that. He'll be like, "Yeah, so can all our other bass playing fans." Ehehe. But he probably won't say that out loud. And I'm gona ask Joe to help me steal Patrick's hats. And I'm gonna tell Patrick that even though he's fat, I love him more than life itself. I KID! But if he weren't fat, I would love him... well, no, I still wouldn't want to marry him. But the POINT is.. I don't have a point. And no, I didn't forget Andy, by the way, I just thought you wouldn't care about what I was going to ask him. ...Not that you cared about anything else I was going to ask them... OK, off Fall Out Boy now. Sorry.
So anyway. Love this new development (as you may be able to tell). And Brody better get fricken jealous of Cameron. And that's ACTUALLY all I have to say on the matter. So there was my long review. So sorry it was so long in coming. D
| Semicharmed love chapter 7 . 1/4/2009
Cute cute cute! haha i just found this today and its totallyy adorable. i thought at first that felicia and Nick were gonna go out but i like this Cameron twist...and i love Christian and Heather. ahh update soon! :D
| Adis Crow chapter 2 . 1/4/2009
I love how you write all the relationships between the characters; Brody and Anyna, together, apart; Brody and Felicia, apart, sort of, distant, though not; Felicia and McKenzie, not exactly sisters, not exactly friends, just talking.
| kelse-a-bells chapter 7 . 1/4/2009
Aww...Heather will eventually have a boyfriend!
And I'm really enjoying this Cameron/Felicia thing going on. I think them going out will have Brody realize that he and Felicia need to be together.
Keep it up!
| ally chapter 1 . 1/4/2009
A very nice story! Please post the following chapters. Would love to know what happens when they both find out they're both.. there. :)