i like it! post the three and a half chapters up! :D it's very interesting so far and i want to read more about felicia and brody! :D

You have a great start here! Everything moves at a nice pace and flows together. I didn't see to many errors; nor did they pull away from the story. Still this is very good and I hope you continue.

awh, i really really like this!

haha, it's a really different kinda idea, but i think it seems really cool.

next chapter please (:

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