|Reviews for The Inexplicable State of Being There|
| artistic dreamer chapter 1 . 12/4/2008
i like it! post the three and a half chapters up! :D it's very interesting so far and i want to read more about felicia and brody! :D
| K. Molle chapter 1 . 12/4/2008
You have a great start here! Everything moves at a nice pace and flows together. I didn't see to many errors; nor did they pull away from the story. Still this is very good and I hope you continue.
| sayruhhh chapter 1 . 12/4/2008
awh, i really really like this!
haha, it's a really different kinda idea, but i think it seems really cool.
next chapter please (:
check out mine?