|Reviews for Shift|
| Kami2015 chapter 1 . 7/19/2013
Very strong opening! I like this story already, a bit long at times but well worth the time put into reading it! Yuku seems like a good shonen charcter and it will be interesting to watch him grow.
One criticism was the repetition of blood. Very brief but after awhile it became a bit silly. I fully realize that there is not an abundance of synonyms for the word so it was not a big deal.
I get the sense that a great mystery is about to start brewing. Why is Yuki the only heir? Where does the sword come from?
I guess I'll have to read in order to find out!
4.7 stars and well worth a follow!
| E.T.Novem chapter 3 . 7/12/2013
You know, when I first joined FictionPress, your story has already caught my attention with the long chapters and consistent followers though i never really looked into your work. But seeing how consistent you had been with your writing, I decided to take a peek...and boy did I regret not reading it on day one!
It has the shounen feel to it no doubt and I have enjoyed the chapters thus far. Yuki seems to be a really big dreamer huh and Saki! She seems to be my favorite character now due to her behavior and nature. I'll continue reading your chapters and I guess there's a lot to catch up!
| Baka-iinchou chapter 1 . 7/5/2013
This is my first time reading this fiction, and i already love it
| Revamp chapter 198 . 7/3/2013
It's good to see Yuki with his limbs fully intact again and reunited with the girls. When Yuki is serious, his words are always powerful, especially to people like Iole and it showed in this chapter.
Legeia is just as stubborn as Yuki is despite what she probably felt at the moment. Interesting to note that Saki killed Vangelis, no doubt with a pressure point blow.
I like your comical approach to 'there's always someone better than you' aspect of the story. Yuki continued to make things fun. I'm also glad that folding was also explained in this chapter. It's such an interesting and complex concept on it's own and it needed the expansion.
I'm also glad that we're going to learn more about the Atlanteans. The next chapter should be wonderful. I can't wait until your next update.
| Revamp chapter 197 . 6/25/2013
I made it to your most recent update. It took me about three months but I fulfilled my promise of reading this all the way through, though most of my reviews were limited to this cell phone and were rather short due to my battery life.
Now I have to wait for your next chapter, but I liked this one. For once, Yuki paid back Eudokia by saving her, even if it was in a comical way. I can't wait until your next update.
| Revamp chapter 196 . 6/25/2013
This fight was interesting. The mental calculation as well as physical attacks were in play nicely. It was like a big game of tactics as Chariton and Eudokia tried to figure each other out. Great, intense battle.
| Revamp chapter 195 . 6/25/2013
Chariton is really interesting to me, moreso his color changing clothes and inventive use of the broom. His powers are quite unique compared to the past generals. Something tells me, I'll be in for an interesting fight.
| Revamp chapter 193 . 6/25/2013
A fantastic end to Yuki's fight. It was definitely all I hoped it to be and his final momets in battle were powerful and gripping.
It's nice to see he and Saki together again. It makes the fangirl in me very happy.
| Revamp chapter 192 . 6/25/2013
I'm intrigued as to what Vangelis meant myself. What is this special type of person he's been looking for? I feel bad for Yuki though. Things are looking grim for him. This fight is just amazing. I love it.
| Revamp chapter 191 . 6/25/2013
Even while loosimg an arm, Yuki still manages that sense of comic relief with Seiji. I love the way those two interact. XD
The reference to Yuki feeling phantom limb syndrome was a nice touch. This chapter has me on the edge of my seat. I love this showdown.
| Revamp chapter 190 . 6/25/2013
About half way through I didn't think Yuki was going to win this one. So far I'm right. His opponent had amazing powers. I am really impressed with Van's skills and his diverse powets and control of them. Another wonderful chapter from you. I love both characters, so it's hard to root for one in specific.
| Revamp chapter 189 . 6/25/2013
The battle is turning into everything I thought it would be. It's nice to see Yuki in a serious battle, showing off his powers in a life or death situation. The fact that he's thinking of Saki as a drivong motivation makes my fangirl senses tingle. Great job.
| Revamp chapter 188 . 6/25/2013
This was a nice end to thier fight. I like the building relationship between the two. They seem to get along well without war and division of sides seperatimg them.
| Revamp chapter 187 . 6/24/2013
I love how you used the birds as Haruo's eyes and the fact that birds have better eyesight than wolves. This battle is great and Haruo and Legeia are strong opponents. A great matchup and awesome fight.
| Revamp chapter 186 . 6/24/2013
I love Haruo's unique fighting style with his spirit animals. It really makes this fight interesting in the fact that Ligeia is fighting the animas more than she is Haruo himself.