Nice and cute!

I really like your one shots but what I don't understand is why the female protagonists always seem to welcome the male protagonist with open arms after he pounces and kisses her and says he loves her. I mean, accepting the guy just because he says the words I love you when all their past actions speak otherwise is kind of superficial and naïve isn't?
For example in this case, how does one know Quinton actually feels for Abby when in the past he's always said to be crushing on other girls and even ditch Abby for them (eg. The dance classes thing), then suddenly when his brother seems to be showing interest in her he gets jealous and proclaims his supposed love for her? Isn't that more like just petty selfishness, how he doesn't want to share her? And Abby - after Quinton says he loves her it's like everything is right as rain, she doesn't doubt him at all when his past doesn't show his romantic affection for her at all, making her come off as somewhat two dimensional and naïve.
Moreover, as interesting as the different settings are, most of your one shots seem to follow the same backbone; guy likes girl, girl realises she's in love with him (if she hasn't already), girl is too oblivious to realise guy likes her back, some misunderstanding occurs and all is set right when guy kisses girl and they both confess their love for each other (or simply, kiss).
On the flipside, I enjoy reading your one shots (even if they tend to be a bit repetitive), and I think your characters are very cute and have great chemistry :) thanks for sharing your works!

This is a very realistic and well-described story. You have a way with words and your characters are well-developed and their personalities are distinguishable. The plot was wonderful as well, the main character goes out with Quinton's brother to get back at him. He ends up calling her a slut, which crushes her because she'd loved him for a long time and she runs off to the fountain. 'Now I look like I've peed' was a funny point in this charming little story. I found myself chuckling at their situation. The swing scene was a nice confession scene, followed by the kissing and sweet words. This is truly a nice little story.

oh boy kill me its fucking good :) awesum! :)

Ahhh I love it

Fish custard is awesome. And fezzes are cool. As are bow ties.

Cute cliche-ish :)

awh !

that was definitely cute ! :)

hoping to read a lot more from you someday !

Aww! And it is funny that she asked the brother. The best way to get any attention haha. I guess that I'm glad I have a brother than haha.

And it is so common for guys in stories to kiss the girl so that she'll pay attention. But I love it! That and the slight drama or big drama haha :D

Love the story!

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AW! that was amazing!

that was sweet, i like it alot

Aw! The ending was great, made me smile.

I liked how they were both really awkward around each other and annoyed and then there's a happy ending. I love happy endings, and I love this one shot.

Cute

sweet

you know i love you.

i think that i'm going to go and find out how to say that you're amazing in multiple languages, so that my reviews have something different about them, because really, i love everything you write :)