Reviews for Lob Omen
Cissy Sollers chapter 20 . 1/8/2009

I am mad at you for two reasons... Maybe three if I decide that it's actually your fault, which I'm sure I will end up doind seeing as Alderic went out of the room to get me some ice cream and is no longer capable of controling my actions.

1) I told you not to turn Amy against her. I TOLD you. And what do you do? You turn Amy against her. To put it quite frankly, *glare* fix it.


3) I haven't read Mayhem yet, so I'm still angry with you. However, I'm sure that when I actually DO, I will once again be happy happy joy joy.
Poyo chapter 20 . 1/8/2009
Great update.

I'll be honest, during the small hiatus of Lob Omen I began looking for other stories that I might read while I waited for you to update. And although the ones I found are expertly written and conducted, I realized I lost a lot of interest just a few chapters in.

Do you know why? Because I didn't feel like reading about anything other than Lob Omen, and I still feel the same. This story has drawn me into the world you've created, and I like that. It's also inspired me to start writing again, like I did many years ago. So I have begun my own story that I hope to post on Fiction Press something in the near future.

Thank you.
Chlo-Bo The Klutz chapter 20 . 1/8/2009
So there is a secret about Cole? I knew it! And Prince? Hmm...something is going to happen
CoryD chapter 20 . 1/8/2009
Arg - A cliff hanger and we have to wait for the next chapter!
Freddy Teddy chapter 19 . 1/4/2009
Freddy Teddy chapter 16 . 1/4/2009
I love this story! But why is his family (with the exception of prince and his dad) so against them. (you don't have to answer that. I ramble random questions to myself!)
Poyo chapter 19 . 1/4/2009
Ah, so Roman has a mean streak. Well, a dangerous one at least. All this time he seemed more of a passive wolf, but it's evident he can be pushed too far too. I'm worried about Roman and the others. These three seem really corrupt and mean.

They obviously fight dirty.

Heh, well Prince does too, I suppose. I wonder why he's the alpha, and where all of that wisdom comes from? He's obviously not a little boy.

Can't wait for more!
Poyo chapter 18 . 1/3/2009
Wow, nice cliffhanger. I must say, I didn't see it coming - didn't think they'd sabatoge the principal's office to get their way. But they did. *Smirks*

So, now we've got way more to worry about. A lot more to unveil. Humans are enemies, or just Leslie's line? And why? Then there's the immediate issue with Roman's cousins, and a few other disagreeing members.

Plus, what's the deal with little Prince? Seems like it's more than just a name.

Awesome stuff. You have a natural flare for writing. I could never spit out the quantity or quality of your chapters as fast and radiant as you do. It's a true talent I'd say, something that should be recognized by more than just the people on this site. If ever you get a story published, I'd like to check it out.

It's something I myself have always dreamed of, but I'm no nearly as dedicated or eloquent as you. So congrats! Hope to read more.
Poyo chapter 17 . 1/3/2009
Well, I wasn't expecting Leslie to react quite like that - but in all honesty, it's realistic. I hope she can learn to cope with Roman's wolf side eventually, he's so patient and loving towards her...

As for Prince! o.o Wow.

I really enjoyed this chapter, I like how you're slowly unraveling the secret behind Cole. I like it.
angelsluv chapter 19 . 1/3/2009
wow, that's the longest i've been gronded. though, i have gotten off grounding and gotten back into it the next day. i hav a problem with sarcasm. wat did u do?
Chlo-Bo The Klutz chapter 19 . 1/3/2009
Gzz Mal and Cole are really, seriously, interesting men. Why you had stop here? Can't wait for next chapter!
JustAnotherLibroLover chapter 19 . 1/2/2009
Ah, don't leave off like that! I love this story, and I hope Leslie will except both Romans... hmm, yeah, I guess that is how you would say it huh? Anyway, please update soon!
XX Kaa Em Ess chapter 19 . 1/2/2009
:D I've been reading this story since about the beginning, but I just got an account and I decided the first thing I'd do is alert my favorite story!

I love love love love LOVE Lob Omen! It's so original yet homely at the same time and I love the connection Roman has with Leslie and I love how realistic you make it by making Leslie scared of the wolves.. because honestly? I don't think anyone wouldn't be freaked if their boyfriend was suddenly sitting as a wolf in front of you hahah.

Update soon! I hate suspense!

wingsrookie chapter 19 . 12/31/2008
Wow! When you update, you update! I can't wait to read it all! (I'd read it first, and then leave a review, but I have to read it at home where I don't have internet, so I'm saying thanks for updating, in advance. ;). )
KiraLove chapter 19 . 12/31/2008
I sorry about your brothers gun. I suggest you DO stab him with a pencil. it would be HILARIOUS. Good chapters. Callie scares me. Mal just seems a bit full of himself. Can't wait to see how all this drama is going to come out to.

-Kira Love
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