Reviews for Lob Omen |
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![]() ![]() ![]() *sadistic laughter* There's that dark side again... Callie... Callie, Callie, Callie. She is officially my evil idol. Well, for the moment. I'm sure it'll change with the next thing I read. But, she is right now. shocked stare Cissa? Yes, love? Come back to sanity. Please. For everyone's sake. *evil grin* What did you say the combination to your weapons was? 32-77-83-...something, something, something... races to change combination number |
![]() ![]() ![]() *grins wildly* You know, I have a rather... evil side, at times. This morbid curiosity. It can scare people sometimes, bit I think it's FACINATING. Take now for instance. Muahahahahahaha... Callie is a class-A bitch, and I'm frightfully curious to see what she's gonna do... HAHAHAHAHAHA! You said my name first! *beams* I feel so spacial! You make me feel special. grumbles And I'm chopped blood bags, eh? Oh, no, darling! Never! It's just nice to know that I'm loved and cared for! jaw dropps AND I DON'T DO THAT? *batts eyelashes* Of course you do... suspicious stare |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like it! It's a little bit awkward, and, well, I'm sorry, but I've noticed little snippets of Twilight in here, with the whole wanting to attack the human and 'I'm dangerous' lines. Other than that, it's good, and I can't wait to see what happens next! I love Roman! I thought that little bit was interesting. Did you get it from the whole Romulus and Remus thing and the descendants being werewolves or something of the sort? Have you seen Blood and Chocolate? |
![]() ![]() ![]() i meant Dissociative Identity Disorder (DID). Sorry... that's somewhat disturbing, the scar thing. PRINCE! I MISS THE CUTE YOU! :D :D I like the pencil thing! I'd like to stab my brother with a pencil, only about once a day. no, I'm not kidding, about once a day I feel extremely hateful towards everything for about 5-10 minutes. i dunno why. maybe I have DID... |
![]() ![]() ![]() AH)HA! Prince has ASSOCIATIVE IDENTITY DISORDER! I've solved it! Kidding! D |
![]() ![]() ![]() *starts whimpering* Oh no! Despite your little brother's efforts, i thought this chapter was really great :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() WHERE THE BLODDY HELL HAVE YOU BEEN?I THOUGHT YOU HAD DIED! THAT IS NOT BLOODY OKAY! AND PRINCE? WHAT THE HELL DID YOU DO TO PRINCE? NO! ! sigh And don't you DARE tell me that I'm over-reacting! I am NOT OVER-REACTING! throws over shoulder Come on, before you kill somebody... *thrashes* HEY! Put me down! I AM NOT FINISHED! PUT ME DOWN! THIS IS KIDNAPPING! Say goodbye... WHAT? PUT ME DOWN! Goodbye. |
![]() ![]() ![]() WHY IS PRINCE ACTING LIKE HE"S THE BOSS OF EVERYBODY? WHERE DID CUTE LITTLE BOY PRINCE GO? Loved this chapter though! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i realy like your story so far you did a realy good job of draging out les and roman getting to know eachother, as it should be. i don't normaly like werewolf storys but you managed to pull it off. nice job. i'll be waiting for more |
![]() ![]() ![]() awesome as always... can't wait for the next installment... cole's an ass |
![]() ![]() ![]() WOW. WOW. WOW. This chapter is made of awesome :D and I like the end were Prince is the one to take control :) I really felt like I was there with Leslie in this chapter, so yeah, I loved it :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() OK - that's sad that she is so afraid. Probably more realistic than then average person not being afraid I suppose, particularly one without out even experience with dogs (there is in the general human population a primal fear towards canine bites that overshadows & distorts the perception of the action - for an interesting read try the book "Dogs Bite: But Balloons and Slippers Are More Dangerous") |
![]() ![]() ![]() Haha I wonder what Amy thinks about this... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh! I just want to give Cole a great big hug. I have two different scenarios why he acts so jerk-like 1. He had a mate. She's gone now. Either died or left. 2. He's jealous of Roman. I think the first one would be more interesting, but ... if Leslie found out than she would definately pity him ... and I'm fairly certain that Cole doesn't take to pity well. He has his pride afterall.. Sorry I didn't review that last chapter. Intense though This is great. Roman is like the Edward Cullen in here huh? Or Jacob? Since yeah... Sorry if you haven't read Twilight. haha |
![]() ![]() ![]() I liked this chapter, it was sweet. |