Reviews for Lob Omen |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Lemme tell you a story: Cissa opened up her email, and happily saw four missed messages. Seeing that the first one was a review from Malicious Squirrel. Opening it, she saw that it was a review for Distance is Darkness. Reading it over, she looked toward her mate, who was, just as Malicious Squirrel predicted, was beaming with happiness. Cissy looked at her other messages, which were actually alerts for Lob Omen. Cissa looked at her mate and said, "Where the hell have I been?" seeing as there were three new chapters. Shrugging happily, she read them all, and is now beaming happily while writing this review while Alderic is shaking his head in amusement while playing Tetris. I DO hope Amy and Leslie fix things. I really like Amy. I will NOT like YOU if you turn her into some crazy girl driven with rage to kill Leslie. I know you'd NEVER do that, so I guess it's not really a problem. _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() I do believe this is the best chapter that you have written. Bravo on that :) Haha, I do believe, that sounds Southern sorta. I guess it's rubbing off on me. Ah Get Roman to just tell Amy that he doesn't like her. Gah. Haha. I wonder if Leslie and Amy's friendship is shattered now? hmm... Merry Christmas and Happy New Year [if you don't post a new chapter before then] :) -Crimsom Tears |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay! This has been a good day! It's not even 2 o clock and all three of my fav stories that aren't finished have updated and in all three the characters finally got together! yay! |
![]() ![]() ![]() awe, that sucks. i get grounded alot, so i kno how u feel. can't wait for the next post! and how did u get grounded for christmas? my parents rn't even that sdaistic... |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love werewolves... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Finally! Another werewolf fan. All it seems to be these days is vampires! But anyway I love your story and that I have to agree that Prince is cute as ever! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don't know, but I think there is just something about Emile that is very haunting. |
![]() ![]() ![]() that's too bad, I really enjoyed this story and was looking forward to seeing what happened. Hope things work out for you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw sad day. oh well i shall wait. fabulous story but you might want to get a beta reader when you have the time after your groundation.i noticed a couple little things like using the word wear instead of where. no biggie. have a nice xmas break |
![]() ![]() ![]() AH! NO! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hope you can get something worked out! I love your writing! I dont want it to end! |
![]() ![]() ![]() *glare* What did you go and get yourself grounded for? Do you know what that means now? You can't beta anymore for me. It would take too long for you to edit. And I am very impatient, as you have probably assumed. *sigh* I really am sorry for your predicament, though. I'm sure it'll work out, though. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like Amy. It made up chuckle because I can just picture her drooling over the jerky handsome guy. I like Lisa too; she sounds more like me then Amy. I'm interested to see what you do with a werewolf character. |
![]() ![]() ![]() hi Prince! I'm reviewing for you! . Not much to say other than, Wow! You took it from snail to running fat pug in one chapter! (Those pugs can get pretty fast! .) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really liked this chapter, and the descriptions of each character were good to :) lol when Christian kicks Leslie's chair :) |