Reviews for Lob Omen
Cissy Sollers chapter 12 . 12/17/2008
Ok, um, I say this with only the thought of constructive criticism om my mind:

I had no idea what the purpose of that chapter was. All that pretty much happened was that Callie was being a bitch, and the Grey family was introduced.

To be quite honest (LOVINGLY HONEST), I was disappointed. You could have done something else to introduce them, and this chapter was just a little bit too monotone for me.

I really do love the story, but I feel the need to have something happen. In short: get on with it.

Please don't be offended, but I really was just making observation.

~Cissa and Alderic
sheddinglight chapter 12 . 12/17/2008
I'm anxious to know how Leslie's reaction will be when she finds out what Roman and his family are.

I don't believe she will tell anyone.

That would be very uncharacteristic of her; from what I think

I was picturing Cole a little older

haha

what grade are they all in?

Sorry if you already mentioned this.

I forgot.

Obviously they are all in high school

-

Well, thanks for the lovely chapter.

Until next time

-Crimsom Tears
Cissy Sollers chapter 11 . 12/16/2008
*sigh* I thought I'd like Cole. He's dark...and mysterious...and handsome...

clears throat angrily

Oh, but nothing compared to Alderic, of course.

grins
Badger In Disguise chapter 11 . 12/16/2008
Send my love to Prince and Roman! They are totally awesome! Gary is my Step-Grandfather's name! Soory, but when I think of the name Cole, i think of a character in Sleeping with the Enemy, and I'm rooting for him! Not in your story however. He's mean in this one. I love the story so far, but it does need to speed up a bit. Nothing has really happened except she's gotten to know Roman better and some clues were dropped as to what they were. But that's prett ymuch it. i feel sorry about how she feels about the hwole betraying Amy thing. I wish I could tell her to just tell amy that she likes Roman, and to be honest. Because if Amy is really like you said she was, she'd get a new crush, quickly. So she could tell her and maybe Amy would be okay with it, right?

Good job, but I must be going.

Sugar and Adjectives, Darkened.
Chlo-Bo The Klutz chapter 11 . 12/16/2008
Aww you put Cole on this chapter! Thank you girl! Sure he seems evil, but their is something alluring I like! Oh, can't wait for home room!
childishjade chapter 11 . 12/16/2008
Yay for Leslie sticking up to Cole :)

lol
sheddinglight chapter 11 . 12/16/2008
Aw I got the awesome gratitude sentence thing :D

Thanks

:)

Wel

...

Is there gonna be more Christian/Leslie action?

Prince said that he 'probably liked' her

And I don't like Cole sorta.

Maybe there's a reason for the way he acts?

Is he [Cole] on his aunt and uncle's side of things?

What with the whole argument.

And screw Amy!

Leslie should have Roman!

He's so completely gorgeous!

...

But I wouldn't do that to my best friend

so

I can see her turmoil.

A guy always has to ruin the friendships

/

oh, great chapter!

Chuck E. Cheese is amazing!

They have this trivia game in the one I go to.
sheddinglight chapter 10 . 12/15/2008
First off, I'd like to congratulate you on your story C:

It's really good by the way.

Prince is adorable.

And he has a very orginal name.

I mean, for a kid.

My friend had a turtle named Prince before...

Alright.

I feel sorta bad for having to point this out.

But...

You haven't addressed it yet, so I dunno if anyone has pointed it out.

I'm not trying to be mean.

Just critiquing [if that's how you spell it] your work

In Chapter 2, you said: "There had never been any men in her life since she was young, and the one she had spent the first four years of her life with, her father, had not been the best of parents."

But like in chapter 9 when Leslie's parents were introduced to the story, she has a dad, Gary, who seems like the ever steriotypical, protect-my-lovely-daughter

Just thought I'd let you know.

C:

Merry Early Christmas!

-sorry if you aren't Christian-

Happy Holidays then
Cissy Sollers chapter 10 . 12/15/2008
*glares at Alderic* HOW THE BLODDY HELL CAN YOU NOT WANT A LITTLE BOY THAT LOVES CHUCK E CHEESE?

sigh We've been over this, Cissy.

*pouts* I know, but she just makes little kids so damn cute.

hugs Darling, don't swear. It's rude.

*grin* Shit.

warning glare Cissy.

*bigger grin* Damn.

grolws CISSA...

*Cheshire Cat grin* FU-

THAT'S ENOUGH! NO MORE CONTACT WITH THE WORLD! THIS IS EXACTLY WHAT HAPPENS WHEN YOU WATCH T.V.!

*giggle* You're so old fashioned. Live a little. *kiss*

sighs You can't do that. It's cheating.
Badger In Disguise chapter 10 . 12/15/2008
I hate Chuk E Cheese's. Their pizza is like cardboard! Yuck! I have to read another story I have on alert. It's about kappas from japanese legend. it's pretty awesome, but so is yours. ow! Soryy, habing trouble typing with only one hand because my foot has a severe cramp and i have to hold it until it goes away. sugar and adjectives, Darkened.
Badger In Disguise chapter 9 . 12/15/2008
I Love Roman too! he sound very very smexy. I love prince soo much. I want him to be my kid! Except the scarfing down meat thing. I'm a vegetarian. That would suck.

Roman is so sweet. Why would Christian like her? Weird. Gottsa read the next chappie! Exams tomorrow.
angelsluv chapter 10 . 12/15/2008
hey, love the story. specially prince, he's my fave. :)
childishjade chapter 10 . 12/15/2008
Aaw, Prince is soo cute :)

I really like the story :)
Chlo-Bo The Klutz chapter 10 . 12/15/2008
Oh... this is going to be good...
Chlo-Bo The Klutz chapter 9 . 12/15/2008
The last line is priceless!
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