Reviews for Lob Omen
Chlo-Bo The Klutz chapter 8 . 12/15/2008
Okay I have to admit, Prince is ADORABLE!
Cissy Sollers chapter 9 . 12/14/2008
No! He's too cute and adorable to feel like that! The moon is BAD! VERY VERY BAD! BAD MOON! BAD!

sigh Darling, calm yourself.

*purses lips* Oh, would you get over yourself? I mean really, don't you want a little boy like Prince? JUST LOOK AT HIM!

twitch No children.

PLEASE?

No.

*sigh* But he's so adorable.

lovingly hugs I know.

*sigh* It's all Hallowmer's fault. She makes far too irresistible characters.

large grin I'm irresistible alright.

*rolls eyes* You're too full of yourself.
hollywoodkisses chapter 9 . 12/14/2008
Oh gosh.

This story is awesome.

One of the best stories I have ever read. :)
Cissy Sollers chapter 8 . 12/12/2008
*grins immensly* I LOVE PRINCE!

Ah, he's so CUTE! I just want to hold him! SQUEE! I wanna little boy... two actually. I'm gonna have two little boys, and they're going to be ADORABLE!

Um, I was given orders to inform you that Alderic is shunning you because it's your fault that I'm now drawing your "stupid dogs that he's going to have to deal with." Did I say that right, love?

mutters under breath You forgot the part about how I'm not going back to Havoc because this is wrong, and I am going to rebel.

*smiles at Hallowmer* Nope. I got everything. He's just a smidge bit pissed off. Don't worry. I'll give him some cookies. _
Badger In Disguise chapter 8 . 12/12/2008
I love Prince too! I could squeeze him to little bitty peices!

He soulds so cute! Are you on the other side of the world? It's 8:25 where i am. You pump chapters out quickly. i could never do that! I have to hide my stories form my father so he doesnt read them, and it makes it hard to sneak a 500 page notebook upstairs to update.

Nice chappie! Love ya Squirrel!
Lily Marie chapter 8 . 12/12/2008
This is great! Update soon!

Yours Truly,

LM
Badger In Disguise chapter 7 . 12/12/2008
WOW! I wish you could update in weekends! I'll be dying all weekend. AND I have exams next week, so I'll have too long to daydream about this story. I'll finish early! That makes me sad that I wont be able to read your amazingness all weekend! Poopie!

Well, good job! Seeya! (Not literally, since I cannot see you, but you get what I mean, right?)
Chlo-Bo The Klutz chapter 7 . 12/12/2008
Oh homeroom is going to be pretty interesting now
Cissy Sollers chapter 7 . 12/11/2008
OK TYPO!

Line 36 says "thier" when it should sat "they're"

And you should love me.

Because I love you enough to read this rather annoying story that is distracting you from NEW CARNAGE AND HAVOC! *sniff* And I miss my sexy man...

shuffles Cissy, darling, I'm right here.

*sobs* OH, HOW COULD YOU? HOW COULD YOU ABANDON MY LOVE?

puts hand on my arm Cissy, let's not cause a scene...

*blows nose in Hallowmer's shirt* OH, HOW AM I TO KNOW IF MY MATE IS DEAD OR NOT? HOW CAN YOU LIFE WITH YOURSELF?

tugs on jacket sleeve Darling, I'm not dead. I've been right here the entire time. And maybe she's just taking some time to concentrate on her new story... It is quite good, actually. I really don't want to go back to Havoc's troubles just yet...

*sobs even louder* I beg of you. Please, please let Alderic be ok. Write more chapters to let me know that he's ok. I can hear his voice, but how am I to know if he is really with me? OH! PLEASE WRITE MORE OF MY ALDERIC! I'LL EVEN DRAW CHRISTIAN FOR YOU!

twitch You will do no such thing. I refuse to let another man into your life that has even the slightest-

*sigh* Too bad Alderic isn't here to stop me. You see, if you had just written that he went to go spend a few days with his mate Cissy, he would have been able to be here to stop me.

waves hands frantically in front of face CISSY? DON'T YOU DARE PICK UP THAT PENCIL! PUT THE SKETCH BOOK DOWN! CISSA, PUT IT DOWN!

*sigh* Well, I guess Christian won't be so bad after all...

glares at Hallowmer Make her stop! Please, before she actually DOES draw your stupid Christian! She can't! I/ME/ALDERIC IS HER MATE! NOT STUPID CHRISTIAN!
Cissy Sollers chapter 6 . 12/11/2008
"Bestiest fwendy wend," my arse!

*sniff* It was for Alderic that I actually attempted drawing at all...

grins broadly And look where that's got us!

*sighs* You wouldn't want those two dogs to get so comfy with me, would you?

growls They'd better stay in the computer if they know what's good for them...

*shrugs* You never know. Maybe HALLOWMER *cough*cough* will just write me into Lob Omen as, oh I don't know, Christian's girlfriend.

twitch

I mean, what, with her wanting me to DRAW him and stuff...that's pretty much how I got you. Would you actually like that competition? What if you loose? *gasp* That would NOT be pleasant. And then do you know what Christian would do with his prize? Well, firstly, he would take me into his huge arms, lift me up off the ground, and passionately-

OK I GET IT!

*grins* So, those guns of yours still off limits?

growls You're way too manipulative for your own good.

*sighs dreamily* You know you love me.

grins I do love, you. Asa matter of fact, there wouldn't even be a competition between the dog and me. And what I would do with my prize is...
Chlo-Bo The Klutz chapter 6 . 12/11/2008
Wow now they finally talked to each other! Hmm...this Cole dude seems off a bit. There is something about him that just different to his other brothers. IDK
Badger In Disguise chapter 6 . 12/11/2008
YOU NEED TO UPDATE! THIS STORY ROX!

I love their supposed smexiness too. They sound fun, except for Cole. He doesn't seem so fun, kind of strict or too business-like. WHy does Amy have to like Roman! WHY? Well, that'll be it for today. I'm looking forward to the next chappies!
Cissy Sollers chapter 5 . 12/10/2008
*glare* YOU CHANGE IT BACK, MISSY! OR I SWEAR, I WILL...I WILL COME THROUGH THE COMPUTER SCREAN AND MAKE YOU! And you wouldn't like that so much, 'cause I gots a vamp bayfriend with some SERIOUS guns. Literally.

sigh Cissy, you can't threaten her with my weapons. They aren't MINE. They are New Havoc's.

*looks thoughtful* No, not the really pretty engraved shot gun... or the .470 double gun with the REALLY nice engraving... or the-

growls Ok, I get it. But, you are not allowed to KILL people with them. They're antiques.

*pouts* then what am I going to threaten people with? I know you wouldn't hurt a fly...

looks serious No threatening people.

*pouts*sticks out tongue* sussessful grin

You got lucky this time, HALLOWMER, for that is what your name is. But, when it's daylight, beware... Alderic won't be awake to save you... Beware...

gorwls angrily CISSA! NO THREATENING PEOPLE!

*shrugs* I have no idea what you're talking about, Alderic.

gives a warning looklookes at HALLOWMER I sincerely apologise for Cissy's harsh words. I'll make sure to lock her into my room during the day, so you have nothing to worry about.

*glares* smirk *scowls and mumbles while storming off angrily* follows with triumphant quirk in his step
Chlo-Bo The Klutz chapter 5 . 12/10/2008
Aw sexy men!
Cissy Sollers chapter 4 . 12/9/2008
WAIT! HOLD THE PRESS!

I NEVER said anything about them being vamps. I SAID that only vamps could be sexy. *pionts to sexy group of not-vampires* NOT NATURAL.

Anyway, story time with Cissa and Alderic! Oh, and by the way, I updated the new and improved Alderic drawing.

x

The doorbell rang as an add came on the television for a new skin cream that was supposedly better than all the other 500 kinds. I got up and walked toward the door, wondering who would be knocking on my door so late. Imagine my surprize when I opened to see Alderic standing there, a huge grin plastered on his adorable face, his perfect teeth gleaming from the light on in the kitchen.

"Hello," his dreamy voice said excitedly. "Cissy, right?"

"Uh-huh," I responded in a high pitched voice. Thankfully, I was gracefully accomplished in the art of masking emotions, which I promptly put into play.

"I know it's pretty late, and you're probably doing something, but would you like to go have dinner with me? I mean, you don't have to, but-"

"I'll get my coat," I responded, cutting off his babbling. He smiled greatfully as I grabbed my jaccked off of the coathanger that stood next to the door.

x

Ah, that was a very good night for me. I'll make them longer next time.
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