|Reviews for Lob Omen
| Trance19666 chapter 21 . 12/19/2010
i was not expecting that
Prince is 19 though he looks 7
i can believe that their cousins killed the brothers sisters
| Trance19666 chapter 20 . 12/19/2010
knew that was going to happen with Amy
we finally going to know the secret about Prince
| Trance19666 chapter 19 . 12/19/2010
they are really evil
| Trance19666 chapter 18 . 12/19/2010
why did you have to make it a cliffhanger!
| Trance19666 chapter 17 . 12/19/2010
a lot was going on in this chapter
Cole's mate couldn't handle his wolf side?
she did something stupid
Prince does sound older then before.
| Trance19666 chapter 16 . 12/19/2010
so that was the reason Cole was so mean
his jealous that Roman has a mate
and he doesn't.
| Trance19666 chapter 15 . 12/19/2010
he can talk to her in his mind
is that cuz they r mates?
her reaction was real
i probably would of passed out
and run away
then be ashamed later when i thought things through
| Trance19666 chapter 14 . 12/19/2010
all i have been saying with this chapters are wow
this story is really getting good.
a little part of me feel sorry for Amy
but the other part is jumping up and down in joy laughing
the kiss between them was really intense
did they bond?
| Trance19666 chapter 13 . 12/19/2010
sorry to hear that you were grounded
| Trance19666 chapter 12 . 12/19/2010
that chapter was really tense
it had me sitting straight in my seat
i already dislike Callie
i can tell she's a trouble maker
and she's probably the one that is going to cause problems between Leslie and Amy.
i wonder what Eden has against her
maybe she thinks that Leslie is not worth her brother's time.
Emile sound very intimidating
while Mel has the whole a hate the world attitude
and i don't know why Cole is not on his brothers side
| Trance19666 chapter 11 . 12/19/2010
the first part of this chapter was great
then Cole came
and ruined everything
is Cole fighting for control over the family?
and Prince is somehow the key to it?
| Trance19666 chapter 10 . 12/19/2010
i like this chapter too
it got me so hyper that it took a minute for me to be able to type a review.
with on the fun stuff happening i'm guessing that the bad stuff is just around the corner.
| Trance19666 chapter 9 . 12/19/2010
this is my favorite chapter
i couldn't stop smiling
though there was that part where all of them was in the kitchen
it was tense
why would Alex want to hurt him?
is it a wolf thing?
i'm guessing that Prince is important somehow in this story.
you have a lot of chapters with his name on it.
| Trance19666 chapter 8 . 12/19/2010
Was Roman avoiding the place Leslie and Amy's work because he dose not want to cause problems with the friends?
or was it because he was fighting with his family?
why didn't he bring Aidan too?
and why is the family fighting?
because of Leslie?
her Mother and Father are really nice
i loved that scene with them
it was so sweet
| Trance19666 chapter 7 . 12/19/2010
the younger Grey are so cute.
Amy is starting to annoy me
but i would probably do the same thing to impress a boy i like
though i do like kids.
i think Roman has been talking about Leslie
so Prince already likes her
the trouble is on it's way for the friends