Reviews for Lob Omen
Trance19666 chapter 6 . 12/18/2010

i don't know if i want to feel sorry for Amy or sneer at her for liking Roman when Leslie does.

i think Leslie is going to try to let Amy have him because she's a good friend

but she wont be able to stay away from Roman

crap he does have a lot of brothers.

any sisters?

and how does the order go?

i'm guessing that Cole might be the oldest

and Prince is the youngest.

i think Roman is somewhere in the middle.

Trance19666 chapter 5 . 12/18/2010
Roman,Christian, Peter and Tanner Grey.

i had the feeling Paul was talking about them.

and i also thinks he likes her too.

though i could be wrong

Trance19666 chapter 4 . 12/18/2010
i can see things are going to get tough

Amy likes Roman

Roman like Leslie

Leslie likes Roman

and Christian like Leslie.

was Peter and Tanner getting mad at Roman because his the oldest of them, so he doesn't have to go?

or something like that.

Trance19666 chapter 3 . 12/18/2010
all the characters are well thought out

You pick really good names for them too.

are Roman,Christian,Peter and Tanner really brothers?

or is it more that they knew each other all their lives, they grew up together and are all really close?

maybe their Pack mates or Age mates

Trance19666 chapter 2 . 12/18/2010
ahh Leslie shy.

it's cute.

Roman is a hot name.

i wonder why he didn't come with a date.

i think Leslie and Amy are going to get in a fight over him.

Trance19666 chapter 1 . 12/18/2010
devil dispenser


you talk about that thing as if it's alive.

is this your first Werewolf story?

Tall,Dark and Snarly(you didn't put his name in there, so that is his nickname for now)does seem kinda wolfish.

does he act mean to her because she smells good to him or something?

in most of the wolf stories i have read

each wolf finds a good that has a really intoxicating scent

and it drives them crazy because the animal side of them like it a little too much.

i like the story so far.

your other story TJL was amazing

so i decided to check out this story

Amy is a really cool character

i like her already

and Leslie ok as well

is this the first time that TDS (i was too lazy to put his whole name in)and Leslie meet?

xFireLilly18x chapter 1 . 12/16/2009
lol, I keep thinking of Roman as Rowan in my head. When I read Roman, I catch myself unconsciously changing it to Rowan.
xFireLilly18x chapter 32 . 12/16/2009
*sighs heavily* I am so speechless I cant write a proper review, but boy was that one amazing story. I seriously feel like you should give us one big, long, chapter full of fluffy goodness of Rowan and Leslie. My emotions sure did take a huge roller coaster ride, LOL

I feel really sad and upset about that part of Rowan's family; you made their grief so real that I felt it, can STILL feel it. And Amy going all jealous, psycho bitch really made me hate her, but then pity her.
xFireLilly18x chapter 29 . 12/16/2009
*blubbers* i am crying so damn hard! WAH!


Damn girl, you are such a good writer! I am sitting in my chair bawling my eyes out and boiling with anger and swearing at the same time, LOL.

My mom has asked me repeatedly if i was really okay, because I am reacting so openly to this story, LOL. Okay, I think that is a sufficient enough review *runs to read next chappie*
xFireLilly18x chapter 20 . 12/16/2009
I really, really love this story so far! I LOVED Rowan, lol.

The way Leslie is reacting to Rowan's wolf side,is REALLY getting on my nerves, but I guess that's part of the story, lol.

Anyway, you are a great writer, and I am happy that I found this story!
RedVsGreen chapter 32 . 10/30/2009
I read this in two days- in between having to study for my exams. I loved it! It was cute,shocking,loving,sad,action packed... All in all it was amazing! There's one thing I've been dying to know, I'm not sure if I missed it... but why was there the feud between the cousins? Why did the fighting start? And do you still plan on doing the Prince sequel?

Great story!
winae chapter 32 . 9/27/2009
i just discovered this fic today and i must say, i love it!

honestly, i was quite doubtful about the story since you said that it's abt werewolves. heh, after the Twilight saga, everyone seems to be writing about vampires and werewolves, so i clicked on the link with very little faith in the story. boy, was i wrong. i LOVE the fluff between Roman and Leslie and i especially like the bond idea. them being able to read each other's mind is a fabulous idea :]

continue writing wonderful stories aight (:
W0lfL0ver chapter 32 . 9/12/2009
The End? for now thankfully... please start the sequel soon! I love this story it is beautiful and fun... my question is how did Amy become a wolf? was she alawys a wolf or did she get turned into one? and if she got turned into one why can't Leslie become one? Feh... don't stop writing.
XxSiennaxX chapter 32 . 6/29/2009
I absolutely loved your story. I wish there was something they could have done for the other brothers and Roman's father.

One thing - at the beginning of your story, in chapter 2, Leslie isn't good with men " and the one she had spent the first four years of her life with, her father, had not been the best of parents." but then from chapter 8 her father is in the picture and he's a really kind man.

Other than that - magnificant

Aria Deloncray chapter 32 . 5/11/2009
Wow! Awesome, awesome story! Can't wait to read the sequel!
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