Reviews for Lob Omen |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This story is amazing! I have 4 stories that I seriously think are better than both Twilight and Harry Potter combined, and this just made number 5! You are a very talented writer, and some of the authors notes made me laugh :). Cheers Whyler |
![]() ![]() ![]() When Amy woke up, she tried to go back to sleep. you're not talking about Amy |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, that was an excellent conclusion to the story. I loved it. Sorry for taking so long to review. I never forgot this story though :) Continue to write, because you really have something going for you here. ~Carm~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow... that was a lot of people dead... It's over already? Awe... ~F.O.D. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cole died? aw... Prince killed them? What? Wow... ~F.O.D. |
![]() ![]() ![]() He aged! He let himself age! ~F.O.D. |
![]() ![]() ![]() AMY JOINED THE OTHER GREY PACK! Is she CRAZY? wth? I still love Prince! ...it must be hard to pretend to be a little kid all the time... ~F.O.D. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh crappity crap crap... Amy is going to kill her... And I DEFINATELY hate the (now dubbed) 'Dark Side' of teh Grey clan. When's Prince come along again? ~F.O.D. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Your school blocked fictionpress too? So did mine. It's lame! They don't block Fanfiction, which has worse stuff on there, but they block Fictionpress. bah! Damn school boards... ~F.O.D. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I definately don't like teh 'otehr' side of teh Grey family. Already I have a bad vibe from them. Why'd they all sit near Leslie? Weird... ~F.O.D. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The moon... Well, it IS a were-wolf story. :D hmm... at only 7, too? THAT'S why he is staying with Leslie! He doesn't know about the wolf part yet, does he? LOVE IT! YOU'RE FANTASMICAL! ~F.O.D. |
![]() ![]() ![]() AH! IS there a Prince Fan-club? If there is, I wanna join it! :D ... family arguing? hmm... interesting... ~F.O.D. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like Peter! He's hilarious! HA HA! I got this story from your friend Poyo, while I was reading her DEFIANCE story, and I must say, she was right! THIS STORY IS AWESOME! This story is going to be fun... I can tell. If you ever published this, just know, that from reading only the first chapter, I'd buy it in a second. And probably re-read it a bagillion times. :D ~F.O.D. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Chuck E. Cheese is awesome! I went there a few years ago for my little cousin's birthday and it was so funny to see the kids acting like gambling addicts as they played the games. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I LOVE THIS STORY LES AND ROMAN ARE SO CUTE |