Reviews for Singing the Last Song
dontneedyou chapter 1 . 4/28/2010
Wow, this was long but very worth reading. It was very...bittersweet. She shouldn't...agh, I just wish she could somehow try and get over him. He's very much an asshole, and she shouldn't be treated that way. At times...he's very sweet to her, and at other times, it's like he doesn't think too much about her. Like she doesn't mean much to him. It's just very jerk-ish of him. But the sweeter times did make me smile.

This was very, very beautifully written. Extremely good job on this!

no one chapter 1 . 4/19/2010
I gotta be honest; there were spots in this that I cringed at your misuse of grammar and became confused about the bad application of past and present tense. However, I think it is worth reviewing because it's a beautifully written story, and you masterfully captured the emotion in a simplistic, honest way. In fact, it made me cry.
AmCoolLikeThat chapter 1 . 4/8/2010
So beautifully, sadistically tragic...I feel like bashing the guys head and castrate him myself.

Alas, I could not inflict any physical harm to fictional characters...woe is me.

Reality is cruel like that...and even if you know that happy endings don't happen in real life, you can't help but want it anyways...or at least, I can't help but want it that way.

I'm stopping the depressing talk-it was a touching and beautifully, sadistically tragic story. I'll love to read your other works. chapter 1 . 3/13/2010
that was amazing. seriously! i loved every bit of it, even the ending. happy endings are overrated anyway right? :)
not atlas chapter 1 . 3/12/2010
you AMAZE me. i read all of your stories in two sittings, and i fell in love with almost every one of them. i'd favourite them all, but you might get annoyed with the notifications. :[

but yeah. i love the not-happily ever afters, and i love the happily ever afters, and i can't really find much i can't love. and i love that in one single story, you can make me laugh & cry & hold my breath. wow.

but anyway, i just thought i should say so,

pce. :]
AbbeyEileen chapter 1 . 2/28/2010
Loved it. Sweet. A little heartbreaking, but common in SO MANY best friend situations... IN REAL LIFE. This piece was raw and real and I loved it. Refreshing, for a story to not have a happy ending.

And now's the time that she sits outside, crying, and a new guy comes in and saves the day. lol jk

Loved it tho. Adorable.
anitsirK chapter 1 . 2/28/2010
SO beautifully tragic. :)
Jaycee M chapter 1 . 2/18/2010
You know those stories that you can just relate to and they bring out all these emotions and melancholic feelings? Yeah, this was one of them for me.

I loved it, as much as it brought unwanted memories back, I loved every word of it. The idea of not using names and just showing the emotions and thoughts. Amazing. I enjoyed reading it. Smiled, frowned, giggled, held my breath, it was all rolled into this story.


I loved your writing. This was stellar. Great, no super great, job!

I loved your 'hanging up' analogy about her 'relationship' with him. Gosh, such simple short, not completely descriptive paragraphs, but you still got your story across.
revirement chapter 1 . 2/16/2010
Stories about unrequited love between best friends don't get me every time anymore. This one did. This was beautiful.
KarmaC chapter 1 . 2/15/2010
Oh my god. Heartwrenching, amazing, wonderful. Beautiful. Sad, but beautiful. Song that pops into my head with this piece: Almost Lover by A Fine Frenzy. It totally fits!
morphine and lollipops chapter 1 . 2/9/2010
Damn, I hate sad endings.

(but secretly, I love them)
anamika chapter 1 . 2/9/2010
get out of my head now please? gah... it happens a few times when i accidentally find something here on fp that says exactly what i want to say in so many words...

*sigh* its beautiful and sad and just like it is...

so tempted to send this to the dense one but scared he'll understand...
Lilaclia chapter 1 . 2/7/2010
Well , first thing .

this was pretty sweet .

But also sad , i loved it .

Congrats on the SKOW nomination !

This one-shot was really great . :)

The whole unrequited thing form her best friend ,

just is so ... sad .

the sad ending did really irk e , but I realized that it just made it like 20 times better . :)

It was a great story .
Jem the writer chapter 1 . 12/3/2009
I just love how you write. It's absolutely wonderful to read. You are an amazing writer.

FizzyLizzy chapter 1 . 12/3/2009
This is a very different story. It's so refreshing to read a realistic story. I love the way you structure your sentences, and your word choices. They just seem so right and can evoke so much emotion without you having to say, "And I was sad. I was happy. I was hungry. I was cheerful." Well done!

Liz xx
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