|Reviews for Who's Turn?|
| StarryKnight46 chapter 1 . 12/12/2008
Cutee. I swear I will like, push him at you if I have to.
Btw, you used the wrong form of "whose" :D
| skyward squidly squee chapter 1 . 12/6/2008
Yea. The second stanza is confusing but makes sense. How could you both have known yet not know, though? The last line of that stanza is great, though. So true. :/. And the third stanza is great, too. I especially like the third line. Between the second, third, and fourth stanzas, though, it feels to me like you're repeating things and just rewording them a bit. The first two lines of the last stanza are a little, meh, to me. I don't know. But i really love the very last line, too. :D. It makes me feel, wow.