Reviews for Unbidden Thoughts
paranoiawilldestroya17 chapter 1 . 12/22/2008
Very dark. What happened to happy dancing bunnies in fields of rainbows? ;)

Its very good, brian. I liked it. It made me feel. Sad. But it made me feel and thats why it is strong.
DrunkenMonkeyKing chapter 1 . 12/15/2008
Hey BeyondRepair, long time no see! Good to see you're still writing a bit, though I have to admit its a dark piece to return with. Not saying that's a bad thing, you've always been able to fill your poems with emotion and this one is no different.

I like the repetition, especially in the first stanza. (The bit in parentheses I thought was a nice touch too).

It's a powerful poem about a break-up (or at least I assume). Good job, man. Hope you feel alright and hope you put up some more writing sometime soon.