RAVINA I LOVE YOU. You are my FAVORITE author on Fictionpress. I love Branded and that one story about the kissing booth! The guys you create in your stories...aagh, I'm in love with all of them. Stay awesome!

wow beautiful, flawless...magnificent

I like that she doesn't forgive her dad. He deserved it.

This was such a cute story! Even though I finished this story only just minutes ago, I think I'm going to go for round 2 and reread it right now. :D Thanks for sharing such an awesome story with us!

Totally agree with u on the 'not forgiving dad' thing , u could have tied up a few loose ends here there but it doesn't matter that much sooo...good story!

I knew it :D well I guess its kinda sad too but...ya know

I KNEW IT

This just turned into metafiction!

I find them to be the lowest form of scum. No siree, no forgiveness from me!
TOTALLY MY VIEW DEAR I ACCEPT ANYTHING EXCEPT CHEATING BASTARD

great stry maybe a stry for ashton ? violet MAYBE

love asha/ashton/ashley ofcourse jayden...nd lydia nd violet also had good parts ..:)

Awwww. That was really nice. I LOVE ASHTON! :") HIHIHI!

Time to do my homework. :D

I LOVE Ashton. :))

loved it :D especially the part where you did't drag it on and on and on and on .. ;)

Oh HELL yes, I loved the way that ended!

i really liked it! :)

Loved it 3 awesome storyy 33 the only thing i didn't like tbh is the way that Jayden told his life story .. in a food court and i did think that was a bit out of the blue, but on the whole i loved every minute of it tbh 3

Omg I love this story! An epilogue would be awesome just to have that closure that you'll know what happened to them but ion the end it's totally up to you! :) thanks fold the awesome story!