Loved it!

I think Maria's perspective towards her husband's actions could have added..it is not easy for anyone to accept the cheating husband. Though she is able to accept Asha as her own daughter I think

I like Asha and her mother's strong attitude..How her mother was able to accept Ashton in a small span of time is nice..

RAVINA I LOVE YOU. You are my FAVORITE author on Fictionpress. I love Branded and that one story about the kissing booth! The guys you create in your stories...aagh, I'm in love with all of them. Stay awesome!

wow beautiful, flawless...magnificent

I like that she doesn't forgive her dad. He deserved it.

This was such a cute story! Even though I finished this story only just minutes ago, I think I'm going to go for round 2 and reread it right now. :D Thanks for sharing such an awesome story with us!

Totally agree with u on the 'not forgiving dad' thing , u could have tied up a few loose ends here there but it doesn't matter that much sooo...good story!

I knew it :D well I guess its kinda sad too but...ya know

I KNEW IT

This just turned into metafiction!

I find them to be the lowest form of scum. No siree, no forgiveness from me!
TOTALLY MY VIEW DEAR I ACCEPT ANYTHING EXCEPT CHEATING BASTARD

great stry maybe a stry for ashton ? violet MAYBE

love asha/ashton/ashley ofcourse jayden...nd lydia nd violet also had good parts ..:)

Awwww. That was really nice. I LOVE ASHTON! :") HIHIHI!

Time to do my homework. :D

I LOVE Ashton. :))

loved it :D especially the part where you did't drag it on and on and on and on .. ;)

Oh HELL yes, I loved the way that ended!