Reviews for Complications
CharlotteBradhadair chapter 9 . 11/13/2011
i really liked it! :)
padfootprongsmoony chapter 9 . 11/6/2011
Loved it 3 awesome storyy 33 the only thing i didn't like tbh is the way that Jayden told his life story .. in a food court and i did think that was a bit out of the blue, but on the whole i loved every minute of it tbh 3
Clichesrthebest chapter 9 . 8/3/2011
Omg I love this story! An epilogue would be awesome just to have that closure that you'll know what happened to them but ion the end it's totally up to you! :) thanks fold the awesome story!
Andrea chapter 9 . 7/28/2011
Awesome story. Awesome plot too. Could have been cliched and boring but you made it interesting and funny instead. Loved all of the characters. Ashton is hilarious and if I had an older brother I'd want him to be just like Ashton. Asha is really likable and reminded me a lot of myself (minus the text message language). Jayden was everything a person could want in a boyfriend- hot, caring, and fun to be around. I liked the part with Violet where Asha takes the time to see past her facade of self confidence and encourage her. It was nice to see a story where the mean girls who go around flaunting their assets weren't all portrayed as evil she-demons from hell. Some (well most) of them are, but there are a lot of them that are that way because they are insecure and trying to get guys to notice them and I'm glad to see that someone else sees that. I also liked that they weren't enemies anymore but didn't immediately become best friend. That happens a lot in stories and its completely unrealistic. I'm glad that you didn't have Asha make up with her dad. I'm all for forgivness and everything like that, but that guy was a major jerk, and forgiveness doesn't mean you have to put up with the person mistreating you if they're still a jerk. I'm happy that Asha gave him a good talking-to cause he needed it. As for an epilogue, hell yes. This was one of the best stories I have ever read (and I've read a lot) and I really want another glimpse into the lives of these charcters. On that note, PLEASE write a sequal. With Ashton or the girl who becomes his girlfriend as the main character? It would be r eally cool to see him get a girlfriend because he deserves one. Plus a sequal would have the bonus of getting to see more of Asha and Jayden. All in all this story was very realistic and I absolutely loved it.
aminami chapter 9 . 7/20/2011
please do write an ending :D it has such a good story plot, ending it like that feels a bit incomplete :( or maybe its just cuz im a sucker for all-round happy ending X)
aminami chapter 3 . 7/20/2011
i love the line " we are conducting our own chemistry experiment" ~~ ahh, i will never forget that XD
LovenLife chapter 1 . 6/22/2011

i just finished reading your 2 stories-complications and devil take it all..loved both of them.

Complications involves a serious issue but you have put the humour very nicely into it...simply loved the characters and the plot. and in case you decide to write the epilogue i would really love to read it!

Devil take it all is fun...i was hung on to the story through out...though i would have liked to read chad's POV.

looking forward to reading 'bet you can't'..!:)
Amy Stardust chapter 9 . 6/10/2011
I think it would be great if you put an epilogue.



-Amy Stardust
mixed signals chapter 9 . 6/5/2011
i-wish-i-had-wings chapter 9 . 5/10/2011
god it felt good to read about when she told her "dad" off! i also liked the fact that she cut her hair *starts humming "she's a rebel"* i liked that the story was so chatty and easy-to-read, but the end was very abrupt and you didn't tie up any of the loose ends.
nicolerools chapter 9 . 4/21/2011
"But the day I hit majority, I moved right back into the big house I shared with my uncle."

I'm not sure if that's right or unintentional, but D, anyways. Love this story, wish their was some kind of sequel, or just continuation because i really like the characters :)
Freakleash chapter 9 . 3/17/2011
I love this. Like, insanely. I love their banter. I love how the characters interact with each other because it's just so smooth. It sounds really natural.

Although a few times, I'd be confused about all the time skips? It doesn't mention the passing of time, so I get surprised when one of them mentions that a certain even happened maybe a month ago, and to me, it had happened, say, a day before?

One last thing: Why must you make someone so perfect as Jayden? It's almost impossible (well, I've never actually met one yet) to find someone like him.
anon chapter 9 . 2/13/2011
epilogue please! :) i wanna what happens to them in the future.

and i agree with you! i hate cheaters!
JaceMollyTim chapter 9 . 1/28/2011
Aww, it's too short! I want more.

It was really awesome though. I was a little skeptical with the big father revealing scene, because alot of people try to incorporate drama and it ends up being so over the top and awful it ruins the story, but you wrote it really well.

Your writing was also very easy to read, for once not riddled with typos and run on sentences.

Anyways, just wanted to say congradulations on writing a fantabulous story! :D
CityBlackOut chapter 1 . 12/29/2010
I read this a while ago, reread it and still swoon over them. please, please write an epilogue or an extra short story with ashton or ashleyy:D they're adorableymuchly:3 jayden sounds so droolworthy xD
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