yes, yes, yes to an epilogue

"This just feels so surreal," Dia insisted. "I feel like I'm in some story some random person out there is typing..."

Okay, that made me crack up:D Seriously, this mini (ish) story is awesomeXD

Does Asha mean hope?

love it! I want that epilogue you were talking about. ;)

P.S. I hate cheaters too. Can't stomach 'em.

I agree with others! You should write a sequel D:

It's so great. I finished the story today because I really love it. Jayden is so sweet. :) Well done!

I love this so much! Love both Jayden and Ashton and especially love that Asha and Ashton were friends before they found out they were related. They pretty much acted like brother and sister anyway. I loved what she said about Ashton getting a say in her love life because he was trying to be a good brother to her. I'm a sucker for sibling relationships even though I'm an only child. I was actually more concerned for their continued friendship after they found out they were related than I was about Asha and Jayden's relationship.

Ashley is adorable and I'm glad that she and Asha now each have a sister :)

I also love that both mothers realized it was neither of their faults and that they each welcomed the other's child into their family.

Lastly, I love that Jayden wouldn't give up on Asha and that they got their happy ending :)

I really enjoyed reading that, very cool story with lots of interesting twists. Well done!

This was an AMAZING story! I hope to read more from you! Loved it! - RoseBriar

Ashton is really cute! Haha! He made me smile!

Nice story. You should definitely write an epilogue. Maybe set a couple of months/years in the future...

Will you write or mention something about Ashton/Violet?

aw, not again! it ended! lol, ok, so thats probably pretty obvious... AWESOME story, but i would love an epilogue! :D

just saying.. *nudge, nudge* xP

guess i'll have to take a look at your profile and see if there is one :)

cheers!

Hey loved it. Any hope for a sequel?

I liked the way you ended things. Life's not always roses and chocolates and forgiveness doesn't come easily. An epilogue would have been awesome but the way it's finished is good

I like the story like this. Love the characters. Funny how her dad thought it convenient to just shove the last eighteen years under the rug. He needs to grow up and grow a pair. I feel bad for Maria cuz she's still attached to him. I hope Violet gets her man lol. Thanks for a wonderful story

i totally support ur decision about asha not in a good term with her father. cheating when ur wife is pregnant is so low!well, cheating in general is low but u get my point

plus he is still acting like a jerk. he feels like he owns asha! that fact really made me mad.