Reviews for Complications
abbsi chapter 9 . 5/29/2009
Hey, I just finished your story.

It was a delight. You made me actually laugh out loud in places. :) And your characters are to cute. I actually agree with the no resolution about the father thing, he doesn't/didn't deserve that right. He KNEW she existed before she walked into that house, had even seen her, so it's not like she wasn't real to him or anything. So, yeah. That's what I think about that. :-P

Anyway, an epilogue would be awesome! Maybe something after a finalized divorce between Maria and the scumbag? *looks hopeful* Okay, maybe not. :(

Anyway, you story was delightful, and I really appreciated the explanation of some of the less common chat-speak.
animegirl214 chapter 9 . 5/28/2009

lol. i read all of ur Romance genre stories. and they are just beautiful! :D
paulina C chapter 9 . 5/27/2009
you should definitely make an epilogue to this story
literati papier chapter 9 . 5/21/2009
i like it. but i think its not-so-happy-ending or something. :)
Emaryllis chapter 9 . 5/12/2009
I loved it! Even though the father was a totally crazy maniac x_x The pace of the story felt pretty fast, but I liked it overall, kept it really suspenseful. I look forward to reading more of your writing :D
Emaryllis chapter 1 . 5/12/2009
Hi there, I'm really enjoying this story so far. I got mixed up at first and thought this was supposed to be a one-shot, but I was really happy when I saw there were 8 more chapters :] I really like your writing style. Sometimes stories sound kind of awkward because they try too hard, but your style really fits. Nice! :D chapter 9 . 5/3/2009
I loved this chapter! (and cheaters ARE scum). Epilogue please?
Pepper Ann Square chapter 9 . 4/30/2009
In the beginning, I thought this was going to be the typical love triangle thing. This is a good twist. It did end rather abruptly, don't you think?
So.Who.Will.Call.Me.Beautiful chapter 9 . 4/13/2009
I can't believed it ended...just like that...-wipes fake tear away- You have to write a sequal! It can't just end like that!
So.Who.Will.Call.Me.Beautiful chapter 7 . 4/13/2009
"This just feels so surreal," Dia insisted. "I feel like I'm in some story some random person out there is typing..."

IDK That just randomly caused me to burst out laughing...
So.Who.Will.Call.Me.Beautiful chapter 6 . 4/13/2009
AW THATS SO SWEET! Love the story by the way.

P.S. This story is HILARIOUS!
kynthiaphellan chapter 9 . 4/13/2009
Aye about the epilogue. You don't absolutley need it, but I personally think you should. Thx 4 da advice 'bout 1shots.

Oh yeah, chat-speak. My english teacher is actually okay with it as long as he doesn't find it in our reports or notebooks or anything we have to hand in, really.
Hazelnut Romance chapter 9 . 4/4/2009
nice! sequel? yes, no?
Green Eyed Angel chapter 7 . 3/22/2009
Heh, that's cute. Because Dia IS in some story a random person is typing out.
Float a Boat chapter 9 . 3/11/2009
I really enjoyed this story. It was very well written and I like how it didn't drag. I love the twist you wrote, I really didn't expect that. I'm glad that she didn't just forgive her father and I totally agree about the whole cheater thing. I hate cheaters and find it hard to forgive those who do it. Asha and Jayden had great chemistry and I'm glad that she gave him a chance. I would love an epilogue, but if not the story does have a nice ending. Definitely going on my favorites.
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