Reviews for Complications
rachelaine chapter 4 . 12/12/2008
NO. FUCKING. WAY. (sorry for the language, but I just did NOT see this coming! :P)

I'm going to finish up the story tonight; I'm excited! :D
Jeni D chapter 9 . 12/12/2008
Yep, there should definitely be an epilogue.

And, just so you know...I LOVE this story!


theslykit chapter 9 . 12/12/2008
ending is too abrupt. story was okay but the ending i say nay.
Gunning Twice chapter 3 . 12/12/2008
this is me when i read this story: O-O

then i went like this: O_O

and then like this: -

and then something like this: .

cuz it was only three chapters long! lol.

Me likes this story.

In fact, I like it so much, I'm going to force my friend to read it then make her create an account just to review it and then force my OTHER friend who actually has an account to read it and tell her to review it too! BRING ON THE UPDATES! XD
I Murder on Impulse chapter 2 . 12/11/2008
Hehe, I love asha!
I Murder on Impulse chapter 3 . 12/11/2008
Oh Dear! I seem to have fallen in love with this story! :P
rachelaine chapter 3 . 12/11/2008
Ah, I love love love this story. I'm sure I'll be telling you that in every review. ;P It's very cute. I love your characters by the way. :)
rachelaine chapter 2 . 12/11/2008
Ah! I love love love this story and I adore the names you've picked out! Jayden...m :D :P
lighty-creamy chapter 2 . 12/8/2008
Wow really good story can't wait to read what happens
MamiPapi chapter 1 . 12/7/2008
wonderful start, look forward to reading the rest
Jainblu chapter 1 . 12/7/2008
I liked it. It's a nice start. I have a few reservations about Asha, okay just one really, but that's cool.

Also I noticed how if your re-arranged her initials then you could get J.A.S. similar of course to J.A.R. and Also the similarity... or exact sameness of the first three letters of Asha and Ashton's names. That's probably not important, I just noticed it though, and however pointless it may be i wanted to point it out... (no pun intended, not really) _

Anyhow I would like to read more of it.

It's cool that you've already written it. I love it when stories are written.. yay ]
Spurlunk chapter 1 . 12/7/2008
Seems pretty cool. I shall read more.
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