Reviews for It's Family Business
readaholicxxx chapter 1 . 8/20/2009
love this story so far!
JZK chapter 2 . 6/6/2009
cant wait for moer

who know maybe charlies dad might suddenly be supportive of charlie and kade because he might see it as a way of getting charlie back into law
Zenia chapter 2 . 6/5/2009
Do you have the rest of this story planned out?

-Read You Later
DigiChar chapter 1 . 3/2/2009
Weird. My first name and middle name is in this story.
Lucy-the-bookworm chapter 1 . 2/4/2009
Wow, I'm so interested to know what has Charlie on the defence. I mean shouldn't she love her father?
JZK chapter 1 . 2/4/2009
this is going to be so interesting

I cant wait for more
Mish chapter 1 . 12/21/2008
Very INteresting... ;) Read your other story, and LOVED it! Hope you start the sequel soon! How about for a Christmas present? This first chappie already has me hooked :P
indijana chapter 1 . 12/11/2008
I already love this story, Charlie seems like an awesome person :) can't wait for the next chapter.

perfectsquares chapter 1 . 12/7/2008
The plot is really intriguing! I liked it a lot. I'll definitely tune in for the next chapter, but there were a lot of typos and grammatical errors that were pretty distracting. Some of the phrasing was a little awkward as well. Nothing some good proof reading (by yourself, or by a beta) can't fix! Overall, great job! :)
fusioncrzyy chapter 1 . 12/7/2008
good very interested in whats going to happen with charlie and the rest of her family as well as Kade )...can't wait till the next chapter!
CoryD chapter 1 . 12/7/2008
Good Start, look forward to the next chapter
Amysweety16 chapter 1 . 12/7/2008
I am totally hooked so far. I am excited to see where you take the characters and what happened in the past with Charlie and her dad.
Grim-Reaper21 chapter 1 . 12/7/2008
it was good watch your spelling on some parts like the last sentence should be he's not he'd but it's a good story..