Reviews for Snow Storm of Memories
The Hippie Nerd chapter 1 . 12/17/2008
I like the lyrics! Have you put them to music yet? I was trying to hear the words being sung in my head, and I think they have lots of potential. You definitely get the sense of snow and it snowing while reading this, though more of a huge storm that buries everything around you. I like the repeated use of the great simile "like a thousand chords and keys." Also quite like how you compare your memories to snowflakes in the chorus- a sad but lovely comparison, and the simple line "It's so cold" beforehand actually packs quite a bit of emotion in how you set it up. Good job!
mashergirl14 chapter 1 . 12/7/2008
wow...i really like it and i feel lk i can relate to it. good job