Reviews for And I shine so bright that you hate me
pinkfairydust chapter 1 . 8/8/2009
Very, very powerful. Well done :)
Written chapter 1 . 12/11/2008
hey there. wow, I really like this, seriously. I'm not sure how to interpret it, especially since it's two in the morning, but I love the way it sounds in my head; just awesome. love the mentions of light and dark.

my favorite:


yours only

possession in the singular

(what is possessed cannot share with you)

so it is only you

in the dark



just... cool. very well done!

oh, and also this:


When you try to catch

Catch me, you Silly Thing

I won’t change you]

I just love the way that entire part is broken up.

fave-ing it and now going to bed haha. good night!
Silveralsa chapter 1 . 12/8/2008
Though I have missed/forgotten some of your previous poetry, from what I remember, this feels very different in style. It's great getting to see other styles of expressions from you, and your talent in wordplay.

Also ended up being God-timed, as I was praying through something that resonated with this about someone. God is definitely good.

He's definitely blessed you with writing talent, and I hope to see more of your experimental poetry!
K. L. Topaz chapter 1 . 12/8/2008
very nice, love the imagery!