Reviews for The Horror of London
Carus chapter 1 . 12/8/2008
I loove it as you know!

8th paragraph: 'the man's stare from before began began to encourage fearful thoughts creep into her the same she realized that she was indeed lost'

Should be: 'the man's stare from before began to encourage [the] fearful thoughts [that] cre[pt] into her [mind], [as] she realized that she was indeed lost'

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