Reviews for Spring Equinox
starless-knight123 chapter 10 . 6/10/2012
I really love the story line but I feel like the story is missing a lot of details, like I don't know what the characters really look like. I also feel like the story is choppy and not reAlly expressing your thoughts through the story, However I really like what the story was about so just work on those things and I think the story could be a hit.

** chow **
AmandaClarke chapter 14 . 5/8/2012
I know you probably wrote this a while ago but I just found this site and therefore only now reading your book and I just wanted to say i really enjoyed it, a lot of the other books here deal with teenagers but yours didn't which was great, the story was great..I would of so brought this for my Nook if it wore for sale!
Imaltht chapter 14 . 4/22/2012
Great story, wonderful characters, I truly enjoyed reading it.
Bearhugsxxx chapter 14 . 11/10/2011
Very amazing story, the plot and characters were wonderful. But I was wondering a few things about Vinca, how old he was and why he had that tattoo?
Nanshi chapter 14 . 11/6/2011
What a great, nice story. still a little confused on how Dom died and why Vin was hurt and got all the to Wyoming but... Overall I like it!
QuickSilverSand chapter 14 . 10/12/2011
good story
Raaawr Ima Dinosaur chapter 14 . 10/11/2011
Aww I simply adored this! It was such an amazing story, great job! :D

Also, how old is Vinca exactly? I've been wondering about it the whole story :)

Once again, amazing job! :D
Angelxoxo13 chapter 14 . 9/5/2011
Read the story in 1 shot, 1 afternoon. It's a very fast pace story that I somewhat didn't notice the important points of the story, the up and down of it, such as when Emily decided to ruin Vinca relation, and when the man's who-his-name the one who killed Dom. I didn't have time to grief it, let the feeling sink in. Most of all I like the story, yes, and my fav part was when Rainie back home from school and finally knew Vinca back to her family for good. It's bring tears out. Happy tears. :)
Fumiki chapter 14 . 8/16/2011
Oh my god, I LOVE this! Spring Equinox deserves MORE reviews! I don't understand why good story like this get so little reviews... Oh well

I love your writing style. The plot is original. And I absolutely love it when Cole kick Kelly's ass! (not literally, but literally is better :P) AND I LOVE THE ENDING! Happy ending rulezz! Yeah!

Vinca would be my favorite character. I have a thing about a short boy with black hair and blue eyes :P though Cole not so bad either. They're meant for each other :D I was kinda hoping I could be in Rainie place, so I can watch them all day in my life. lol
Blu chapter 12 . 5/1/2011
The plot doesn't make sense.
grapedragon chapter 14 . 4/17/2011
Hey, I just read your entire story and I have to say:

AWESOME! I loved the plot and all the characters.

Especially the way Vinca and Rainie interacted! It's very lovely.

One can also see that the love between Vinca and Cole is a pure one.

Your style is great and your story got never boring!

Thank you for writing it!
AlbinoApples chapter 11 . 12/19/2010
Okay, so I'm slightly confused. I thought that Cole called him Vinca because he didn't know his real name. His real name actually is Vinca?
Hell's Aphrodite chapter 14 . 8/12/2010
Oh sweetie. I've got to tell you that I absolutely ADORE this story! It was so beautiful and sweet, yet not in a crappy fluffy way.

Your main characters were really well thought and realistic. Cole wasn't some ultra super macho man who would every night sleep with different women and ignore the other part. And Vinca wasn't just some super weepy effeminate pussy boy who would pine after Cole despite the other's poor treatment of him. Those kinds of stories make me story itself was very beautiful and you made it even more so with strong and colorful characters. None like the other.

So continune to write good stories like this one and we all will be super happy (I'm NOT sarcastic)!
Wren chapter 14 . 6/3/2010
I liked this story, maybe it's just because I have a thing for cowboys.
Alarik chapter 14 . 5/14/2010
Its so sweet story. I really liked Vince and his cooking. "Wish I can cook also."
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