|Reviews for hospital colours|
| Isca chapter 1 . 12/9/2008
"Meant for dreaming and dying." Wow. That's so sorrowful!
"Never let you alone in a room again." That line is very striking.
"I'm busy looking at the woman whose husband didn't make it." Brilliant!
| fatbird33 chapter 1 . 12/9/2008
terribly sad, but well written.
| Eva Pomerance chapter 1 . 12/9/2008
This poem is /wonderful/...so sad and beautiful.
I particularly like the imagery: "The wind in your/memories/becoming cold and swollen in my coffee.
Have you uncapitalized "I" for a reason?
Thank you for writing this. This is definitely a break from most other writing I see.
| softersin chapter 1 . 12/9/2008