Reviews for Limbo
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 1/23/2009
"my limbo is every thing about you"... everything

"No matter how much I bath,"...bathe

I love the line about the white flag. That was a really unique and interesting image. The way you described the limbo was a bit boring and not as good as I know you can write. I do like the bathing part though... that was interesting.
burning in effigy chapter 1 . 1/18/2009
you've managed to create that flow that songs have, and the lyrics are meaningful (much better than some of the music on the radio these days)

really liked: "No matter how much I fight,/I lose anyway… But/the white flag stains itself with red." really nice imagery. sad but symbolic

very nice job on this!

(and thank you for your reviews from a while ago)
Natalie-Rayne chapter 1 . 12/15/2008
I really like the part

"No matter how much I run,

in the end I return here,

this place I disklike."
Eminie chapter 1 . 12/11/2008
Very poignant song, that's really true. It's part of life.
The Reverse Edge Blade chapter 1 . 12/9/2008
I liked this song! It had a nice messge, and it was written with sentences that made it easy to pick a melody. The line "Wait, it's always dirtier" was a little hard to put into the melody, for it stood a little out with the "wait" part. But other than that, it flowed really well!

A nice song! Keep at it!

The Reverse Edge Blade
Erlkoenigin chapter 1 . 12/9/2008
A great poem! Reminds me of Dante. The repetitions are impressive.

Limbo is the part of the part of hell, where the “good pagans” are staying, right?
Isca chapter 1 . 12/9/2008
I liked the repetition of the words "I'm caught." It really gave the song a 'hopeless' tone that worked really well.