Reviews for It Hurts
XxHuntressofArtemisxX chapter 1 . 2/1/2010

Pleasure Principle chapter 1 . 5/20/2009
wow this is good. i think you captured it PERFECTLY! i know this feeling! you captured that emotion really really well. nice job.

and it's nice to see another Bartimaeus Trilogy fan out there!

props. keep writing.
Cynically In Love chapter 1 . 3/30/2009
That's deep... really deep. One of the reasons why I don't wan to transfer schools next year, actually. The same thing is actually happening to me, too. It seems as if my two besties are drifting away from me as the day goes on...

This piece of writing is amazing, though it's depressing to know that this is a true story and not a work of fiction. And, don't worry... you made sense to me, so I'm thinking that you'll make sense to everyone else! :D

Keep on writing AND laugh every single day, even when you sad!

~ Love2ReadnWrite
Aaron K. Turner chapter 1 . 3/2/2009
you reviewed one of mine so i'm reviewing one of yours amazing well written and i've been in this situation before so i can relate
UrFaveFreek chapter 1 . 2/19/2009
Not to be insensitive cuz this story wuz awesome but did she move or like die? I am confused. I really hope she didn't die cuz that would be so sad.
PotoPerson chapter 1 . 1/20/2009
Its almost like a poem or a song. You did a nice job I like it!

"It hurt when, one morning, she appeared you and said you would soon live next door her"

The sentence is sort of confusing. I think you may have forgotton a word in there.

"...each little grain searing my skin with an image of happieness..."

That e after the i isn't there.

Keep on writing!;D
S. Valle chapter 1 . 1/6/2009
that was so sad

and very well written

it expressed the sadness very clearly
MagicalSpork chapter 1 . 12/16/2008
Aww, so sad. Nicely written, though.

(Thanks for reviewing my story, by the way!)