Reviews for Constellations
16andbreggers chapter 1 . 6/23/2009
The ending, and not only the ending, mind, took my breath away.
ArtisticGeist chapter 1 . 12/14/2008
Oh I like it, short but awesome. I simply LOVE just laying on the ground and finding constellations. This poem made me grin. )

~*ArtisticGeist*~
she smolders chapter 1 . 12/10/2008
It was over a year ago when I last laid down outside and really looked at the stars and I felt dizzy at the sight of them. That's what this poem reminds me of - the dizzy, gorgeous feeling I get when I look up at the stars. The repetition in the last line is somehow soulful and wonderful too.
WonderWing chapter 1 . 12/10/2008
Good stuff, really touches on that feeling of vastness the stars perpetuate. Love that fourth stanza, and the one after it just caps it off with that lonely, rambling feel perfectly.