ok now he wants to be gay again huh he should make up his mind

haha that was really funny loved when she said cover your face cause she didnt want her brother to turn gay

ok so she doesnt actually know if she is shes just saying she is because everyone says she is

This chapter, I'm sorry to say, is all over the shop.

It's disjointed and really frustrating.

I'm appealed b the sporadic-ness of the story but that last scene in particular was very messy and just not that great.

I think if you want to add in the fake boyfriend it's gotta be planned or at least she as to catch on faster than that. Granted her punching him was great comic relief but it's not fitting.

Also he sudden water works display? Not really working for me. I liked the fact that he was going after her when she started crying but maybe instead of tears you could put her as having a dejected look on her face and she looks miserable and then he goes after her and then leaves her again with her in a gobsmacked/sad state of mind.

Another issue, in the chapter with his perspective and he says I love her, how long after their meeting is this.?. I hope it's not just a week or month or so after because it just doesn't ring true.

You could say he has an intense case of like that seems to be progressing rather rapidly.

But after all this, I do have an intense case of like for this story. It's different, quirky, funny, sweet and cringe worthy all wrapped up into one pile of mush ;)

Good job

No Dammit! You should continue this! TT

i super love the story. :)

:) this is quite funny. I like it a lot.

although, when you finish this, if you're planning on doing any editing I would advise that you make her disgust for men (such as even being around them or whatever) less overpowering. As a lesbian myself I can assure you that I have many guy friends, and even though the majority of my school detests me there's always that small student population who accepts homosexuality.

merely a suggestion. :)

Haha.

Amusing storyline.

But I like it!

Can't wait for more!

~HPRK

hahhaha..this is a very interesting story..very fun and unique

Sarah is so dense, clueless and i find it cute :)

Hi. Really enjoyed this story. It was a really unique plot and very entertaining.

Looking back at my review on Crossing Boundaries, I'm sorry I didn't realise it sounded so wierd/harsh/demanding. Like this story, it is a very good read.

(Sorry I'm sending this to you in a review, though it is killing two birds with one stone. I'm new on FP and am still working out the logistics of the site.)

I really enjoy reading a happy ending. Thanks for sharing.

desmoulins.

you need to change her into his in this sentence. "I saw Logan approaching us, leaving her angry girlfriend behind." Other than that amazing story.

This story was awesome and i loved the ending xD

SEQUEL (SP?)!

Aw!

Really Cute!

I Loved It !

He obviously doesn't know what love is. But that's kind of

...stupid

...adorable?

OK.