I Love Doni :D

Sorry.. just answering the question.

I just read the whole 5 chapters, and I got to congratulate you, You. Are. And. AWESOME. Writer.

Seriously, i never thought antyone would have that much imagination to create something like this, Never.

But I guess I was wrong(:

I'll be "patiently" waiting for the next update. :D

I bid my farewells.. NOW!

! XD

peace&..love? :)

Kim!

oh so kool ;)

cant wait for the next chap !

is perri going to become powerfull cuz it gets boreing when she has to get saved all the time .

miaby make her power grow every couple of chaps .

i luv perri i hope she shows all of them thats shes not to be messed with lol

-giggle- You don't have to do that, I always review, cause I know how good it makes people feel to receive reviews.

I think Doni is a bit too soft, like maybe if he had more of a 'Troll-ish' persa around him, maybe being a bit more aggressive and not always so a-drift and lost in thought.

He seems like a good friend but I think it would be nice to see more of their friendship, like how you always show Taranis and Perri always are teasing eachother and laughing, while with Doni it seems to be too serious. Or maybe I have alot of friends that I tease in real-life all the time and it is my way of showing affection, cause I've never really had a 'deep' friendship in that way. -shrugs-

Keep up the good work

Wow... That was a turn of events. I so wasn't expecting that.

Well done, and can't wait for the next one~ Keep up the good work

Periwinkle, lol! How did you come up with the name? XD Anyway I'm surprised as Perri that she is in love with Cadfael - who is lucky that he only got away with a cut and didnt get choked to death! - but the dude is using magic, right? There is something sneaky about him...which means that I will returning for more and will be looking forward to just that XD

Just one question, are you planning on moving your story "End of My etc..." here?

This story is so intersting. I especially like the part whan she went crazy with anger for a while. I hope you update soon.

more plz

i like how the relationship is struggling at first b/w the two cause then we (the readers) know that there is more to the plot then them falling madly in love at the beginning which makes a short...story. haha.

Don't worry, you can always count on me to review every chapter, its just the way I am. P

Great chapter, I love how you've managed to define Tara and Perri's relationship so fast without it seeming odd. Definately talent right there.

Keep up the good work, I can't wait. By the way, I have no idea about the visitor and hit thing xPP

this is an interesting start to an original idea (well the only one i've seen). re-read your stuff cause you left out some words and there are minor spelling errors..otherwise great start! looking forward to next chapter

I think this was a very interesting introduction to a story, and it makes me want to read more. I'm about to go to the next chapter.

Keep up the good work :)

REVIEW!

-giggle- I am liking this, and am so glad you put out another story! D!

Can't wait for the next chapter honey!

Hm, pretty good. You've got me interested and I wanna read more.

:P keep going, you're doing a good job here.