Excellent mebbe cad and pedro run away and have mini perris and cads hehehe

i am absolutely in love with this story. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

Oh man! Its been decades! My Goodness. But I loved this chapter. Doni is just...he's not being nice. He asks for the truth...but then he gets it and acts like a little bitch. Excuse my nasty vulgarity. Anyhow. He stepped...on the bow! RUDE. Just when is Perri gonna start realizing that these are not dreams? Its hilarious how excited she gets though! Plz Update soon this time )

I was about to give up on your story and stop checking back for more when I saw that you added this chapter. I want to say that I love this story, and it is awesome, but there were two issues with this chapter.

1. You wrote it with a thesaurus open, didn't you? Don't deny it. This chapter felt like an attempt to show off vocabulary. It didn't really add anything to the story.

2. You described Cadfael's eyes as gold about twenty times in a few paragraphs. We get it, they are gold and pretty. If she loves him for more than just his eyes that should be reflected in how she thinks about him.

Other then those small things, I enjoyed this chapter too.

Great chapter!

Aww I feel so horrible for Doni! And I feel bad for her too, but she needs to see that he obviously can't be with her when he loves her so :(

Ah Cadfaeal... so many words to explain him, I just love him!

Hahaha she showed Eira!

Oh snap! Words can not describe how awesome that chapter is.

You know you have a good story when there's a huge time gap between updates and I don't need a recap. Good work! I can't wait to read what happens next

Wow. That mind thing will hopefully convince her that it WAS NOT A DREAM! Smack her upside the head for me, please. But, I don't get why they're fighting. If you love someone, sometimes you have to let them go, and if they love you, they will come back. Yes, I know it's overused, but it's true. 100% true. Doni, I can't tell whether it's some deluded thinking of his that calling of the betrothal will make her fall for him because he's letting her go or not, but that's what it seems like to me.

Wow. That seemed way to serious. There were a few minor errors that I am too lazy to point out, but other than that, AMAZING.I wish I could write like that. I can't. Even my best story(Spilt Blood) sucks.

Keep Writing.

Yvette, you have always been a miraculous storyteller. This story is brilliant. Please continue updating.

Wow. That was climatic

I'm so glad you've update again, I missed this story. But I hope college gets easier for you. Your lucky you only have a 2 year course, not a 6 year like I have to do starting next year _

I just remembered why I love this story and your writing so much. T_T This chapter was so emotional and wonderful. The joy from the dream with Cadfael and the pain from the argument with Doni. Oh man. Oh man. I love love love this story. Please Perri has to realize someday, just a bit of suspicion, that the dream might be real. That Cadfael might like her. That they love each other.

On another note...:O

It has been wayy too long since your last update, but I understand about the college workload :T Hope you update during the summer~ Gluck!

I love this story! OMG! I feel so sorry for Doni. It's not like Perri sets out to hurt Doni, it kind of just happens. I love how Taranis, Perri, and Llyr are bffs but she hates Doni with a passion. Anyways, Perri's friends are awesome. They remind me of my group of friends at school. Cadfael. What can I say? He's got the Edward Cullen syndrome where everybody wants his body. Not to mention the fact that he can read people's minds. I absolutely loved the Dream chapter. Perri is so head over heels for Cadfael that she completely failed to realize that it wasn't a dream! And when it happened again? Priceless. I just love how Cadfael isn't this perfect person. I mean, who is? But he's got some serious issues he needs to sort out. I think that it took a lot of courage on his part to open up to Perri the way he did.

I really hope that you can update soon because I really like this. I understand how fickle muses can be and school can be no joke at times. However, update when you can!

Wow, it really has been a long time, and I forgot how brilliant your description is! O:

But seriously, you describe things so perfectly, it should be illegal. Your writing kinda reminds me of Robert Jordan, and thats good, cos he's 8 on the worlds best selling series list :)

Poor Perri, can't make up her mind :( And Doni, well he should be grateful that she was still gonna marry him.

I know you're like really really busy but please try update whenever you can :)

I Like, I Lust, I Love!Please Update Soon!

Im a new reader and just wanted to say: this story is freaking AWESOME! Please, please, pretty please continue?

i love this story. it's very original. are you going to update any time soon? just wondering, you don't have to.