Reviews for discord and rhyme
InkWitch chapter 1 . 11/26/2010
that is a really scary poem(?) but it was well written. i'd like for u to pay more attention to the punctuation and stuff. thanks for the read :)


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she left ringing in his head chapter 1 . 1/20/2010
"of not knowing where i can and cannot start"

beautiful. you have a wonderful way with words.
tonight we bloom chapter 1 . 11/28/2009
beautifully written.
The Melancholy Cocoa Bean chapter 1 . 2/12/2009
flawless; as always

Essence of the dawn chapter 1 . 12/31/2008
I loved your poem. I hear alot of myself in there. I really do know what it is like to FEEL TOO MUCH. I have learned the past few years that I am not in charge. There is much more going on than I know and a larger picture to see, but not yet!

I hope one day you will too. But not yet!

God Bless
Mourning Sickness chapter 1 . 12/19/2008
Wonderfully written. chapter 1 . 12/11/2008
i can feel the emotion and it runs in the veins of this poem.

it feels so cathartic in a way; trapped, but releasing? I enjoyed it. great job! :)
AStrangerToYou chapter 1 . 12/10/2008
Sad but really good :) And the title works really well, that was what made me read it.