Very little dialogue, but still fun to read! I especially liked the bits with the boots!

- Rebekah

that's so sweet

i don't know where you get your ideas from but it doesn't matter anyway

i still love this dx

heh heh that was awesome specaily the just try to get him to pay for the food part lols for some reason i loved that

Another cute and awesome story. I'm not sure how I'd feel, with a guy sitting outside my dorm everyday. I think I'd call the police, unless he actually did start to grow on me...But I can see where the girl is going, it's not like he tried anything which added points to the growing on her. I liked reading this a lot, it was different and very well written. Good job with it!

oh my. you write good with such stories.

-threm. i love it.

Aw, I loved this. You write such cute stories. :)

Aw...I liked that lots, and the last line made me laugh. hehe Wonderful writing. I hope you never stop. )

I really liked this, it was so cute! Keep writing!

Hey, it was a great story (and really cute), but I reckon it could be a bit better if you added why he moved in with her in the first place. And where he went when she was dating Jake. I think it would conclude the story a bit better.

xxjen.

Aww:) This is really good! You are quite a talented writer! I have to complement you on your transitions, because so much happened in this chapter and ofter writers end up jumping from place to place... oh and the story line is very unique:). So bravo! I look forward to reading more soon!

that was the cutest story I've read it a really long time i wish some random guy would sit outside my door but not someone creepy... no definatly no creepers

Anyway Yay it was good

Luv

COULK

why cant this happen in real life :P

nice love story...