|Reviews for The Moonlilly Ball|
| Emily's Mom chapter 1 . 12/19/2012
You are a talented writer. If you commit to writing every day and never never falter or give up, and you keep writing every day, who knows what will pour forth from your soul?
| ArtisticGeist chapter 1 . 12/14/2008
That's gorgeous, love )
May I suggest more commas though? Not that there are any placed incorrectly, it just adds flair to the poem when there are commas at the end of each line. Very descriptive poem though, your choice of vocabulary is lovely.