|Reviews for Mistaken Confidences|
| Isca chapter 1 . 12/11/2008
"And the beauty of the damned was her to carry." HOLY! Incredible line! I think it really tied the whole poem together and made it strong, unified, emotional, etc.
| cetus.nightmare chapter 1 . 12/11/2008
...A'ight, I liked this enough to make an account to review it.
First things first: When I read it, just in m'head, it was at first to me very, very wordy. Wordy in the sense that the words seemed unnecessarily complicated.
Then I read it again, out loud, a hint of tune, and it is very, very pretty. Very, very pretty. I think, given the right tune, it would be a very pretty song, as well.
I go now to look at the rest of your work, should there be aught else. It is, indeed, very beautiful. Thank you for writing it.