I didn't know I'd enjoy another cynical romance one-shot.

But this I certainly did. Great job.

I think this was pretty well written. You described the emotions fantastically and even though there weren't any names involved, it still felt personal and deep.

Nice job.

Wow.

Such powerful writing. Best thing I've read in a long time!

Fuckyeah! Fuck yeah man, pssh.

Yeah... That'sallIcansay. High fives all around.

KUDOZ! Manymany.

Indeed... that was pretty awesome there, I liked it... but I wanna see a story written from male perspective on a cheating experience.

I loved emotion is so can't find writing like that in to many places.

this story reminds me of my bf

he cheated on me and i knew how the woman in ur story felt

u described everything beautifully and i loved the ending

i so would do the same thing if i actually were brave enough

but overall the story is amazing and i loved it!

Cheers to u!

I loved it! Oh my goodness, I even teared at the end of it!

The way you wrote it was definately different, and this experiment shows that even in a different writing style, it's still good to read!

I loved it! Great job.

that was very beautifully written!

:D

i can feel her pain. stupid cheaters! :s

it's just sadistic how she caresses his face before she slaps him. but actually i was thinking maybe it'll be even better if he closed his eyes before she slapped him. darn. that'll be even cooler. ahahha. but at any rate i love this girl already. she's got spunk. hahaha. i like the new style of writing. it's.. impactful. especially the slap. -evil cackle-

i absolutely love it. it'd always piss me off when ever the girl took back their cheating boyfriend after a few tears. finally! maybe because it captures the very emotion i feel each time a special person to me takes back the lying, flea-infested maggot she calls her husband. its what i wish she'd do to him, because i know very well that without her, he is nothing, he would have noting...

so as i said. i love it!

The emotions of this story are really intense and well thought out. Great job on expressing the thoughts as well. It was a great short story.