|Reviews for A River in Egypt|
| Netrixie chapter 6 . 9/3/2009
“Mr Pedder, there are young ladies present!”
“Oh, please,” I barely rolled my eyes, dabbing on a slick of lip gloss. “I assure you, I’m very gay.”
“Mr Pedder that really isn’t the point...”
Best Lines EVER.
Just wanted to let you know that. And as for Gareth on the runway- good for him. Have I mentioned that this story has made it impossible for me to stop smiling? Cuz it has.
| Netrixie chapter 5 . 9/3/2009
Poor, Jonty! hahahaha, though, that was too funny. I can just see everyone's reactions to the song...but Jonty's right- where was Gareth? Well, I'm going to go find out now... _
| Netrixie chapter 4 . 9/3/2009
*bows down to the awesomeness of the authour*
You are so amazingly gifted at writing Gareth. I think you must know someone who acts like him- he is entirely too lifelike to be real. But perfectly written. I had a smile on my face the entire chapter. Yay for the next one!
| Netrixie chapter 3 . 9/3/2009
I love the way you had Jonty describe the way they met- well, that first time. completely belieable...though I think I may have said that before. _ But you write really, really well, and all of your metaphors and similies really make sense. Good work!
| Netrixie chapter 2 . 9/3/2009
Oh. My. Hey. I LOVE Gareth! He's completely believable, and real- and even more, he's so cute! I love the way you've written him, and I absolutely cannot wait to see what Jonty has to say about this! lol
| Netrixie chapter 1 . 9/3/2009
Okay. One chapter in and I'm already in love. Drag and dyslexia? It's gotta be good. So, off I go to Chpater Two, and I hope it continues to live up to the First. See ya there! LOL
| fairies and snapple chapter 13 . 8/24/2009
This story is so, so funny. I like how completely distinct Jonty' and Gareth's voices are, and how it's like they're explaining to a slightly dim audience how exactly they got together. Please update soon!
| mintyfish chapter 3 . 8/21/2009
haha...Gareth's got Patrick Wolf hair. Fabulous. This is adorable.
| Zom chapter 13 . 8/20/2009
So, despite the fact that I should really be sleeping so that I can wake up at a reasonable time tomorrow, I stayed up to read all that there is of this story so far. It's a very, very fun read, and I especially love the chapters written from Gareth's point of view; I can just hear him so well in my head, and I almost want to read those chapters out loud, haha. Probably would, too, if it wasn't so late and I'd have to be quiet or wake up my sister sleeping in the room next door.
I eagerly await more, especially now that complications and drama are rearing their heads - even if I know (or can assume) that the ending will be happy and resolved, Gareth and Jonty together and content and hoorays all around, or something of that nature. Seeing how things unfold to reach that happy ending will be fun. :)
| mer chapter 13 . 8/16/2009
this is delightful! a refreshing ray of hilarious - no, delirious - sunlight. exactly what i'm looking for on this site. your characterization is beyond great. please finish this, it is brilliant. and, thought i'd mention it, i'm having fun looking up british slang on urban dictionary :D
| Jelly muffins for Bree chapter 10 . 8/16/2009
Oh dear, gareths so sexually perverted! I love it. : D
Do promise that you will update speedily and there will be lovin' eventually! Please please please!
| Erickalalala chapter 8 . 8/16/2009
OMG this story is so chill! Not even funny. I absolutely adorre the two main characters! I hope u no I'm tellin all my friends and ur bout 2 get lots more reviews. (;
| MomoInsane chapter 1 . 8/16/2009
I just wanted to mention how I love this. To itty-bitty pieces. I'm addicted to the glorious fun and sugar and sweetness and adorable little Jonty and his evil sister, and completely amazing Gareth. I'm very very eagerly awaiting the next installment. Love love love
| Solais chapter 5 . 8/5/2009
Oh, my God, I cracked up. The whole story's funny as hell, but this chapter... this chapter is monumental! I cried reading the song lyrics.
I love them both to pieces. Their voices are distinct, and they come across really good.
Between this story and Nerves, I just found myself a favorite author.
| writtenbyrandom chapter 13 . 8/1/2009
Still love this story! It makes me sigh- in a good way, of course. Jonty and Gareth are so cute together!