Reviews for My Garden
steffxnie chapter 1 . 1/26/2010
This is really good. I like the idea and the meaning behind it. Very true. Good work! :D
tonight we bloom chapter 1 . 8/6/2009
This is really good, I enjoyed reading it. The bold letters left me a bit confused though. Do they spell out something?

I would love opinions from a writer like you on my work, it would mean a lot!
vitriolicvermilion chapter 1 . 12/13/2008
Ever delicious. I love your poetry, especially when it's personal, and this was the most amazingly rad metaphor ever.

I like the use of the bold letters to spell it out.

Cos people that haven't read your stuff before might not get it.

Wonderful! (:
Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 12/11/2008
"the rest of the garden" - is only six syllables, not seven.

But I really like this piece! I enjoy writing poems in haiku forms too. :) Great job. Write on!

~Anna~ _
Couronne de laurier chapter 1 . 12/11/2008
This is brilliant. :) I really really liked it.

What's the significance of the bold letters? I liked how they kept the beat going visually. (I must sound like such a geek)

Haha. Anyway, well done. :)

I'm off to check more of your stuff.
Ganondorf The Dark Knight chapter 1 . 12/11/2008
I loved it. :]

And flowers are my favorite subject.

Haha. Great job.