Reviews for Addie and Tria |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Mkay, so it's taken me for freaking ever to review...but the windows been open fir god knows how long to remind me...guess I just fail... Oh well! It was funny as hell! They were all rawrg-egty rawrrawr and he was like psh, bitch I win...but diplomatically I love how he's more mature than his parents! Can you tell I'm tired? Meh well school'll be over soon KEEP WRITING! Or I shall...rebel...? I dunno...write the summer away! I command thee... Mkay done, bye! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I've loved it all, I must say. I had this big long review typed out, but being the idiot that I am, somehow managed to erase it all. And I'm too lazy to retype it all. But, I'll say it again (in all caps, because caps lock is cruise control for cool) I FRIGGING LOVE THIS. And I shall be eagerly awaiting updates. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I was like "shitzorz r dey srs?" when his parents talked about publicity. (I think like white gangsters.) ANYWAY BAW AT THEM. That must suck. I like this drabble too. But now I should really get to sleeping. I've got a major Math exam tomorrow that I haven't studied for, go me. You're so lucky with your school-less days. D: And as always, you write awesomely. The name seemed perfect. Only criticism is that Addison's parents might be a little stereotypical-but I guess that's only because we see them from this angle. I really like the name Jacob, for some reason. So even though Jacob here seems like a really big bastard, I still like him more than Marie. She seems like an utter bitch. GOOD NIGHT. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Once again I love this story. Addison was really brave to do that in front of the press and then make his parents understand, he's awesome even when it was hard. Love the drabbles and love to read more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. This was such an emotional chapter. I can't imagine what it would feel like to make such a choice, and I'm grateful I've never had to. Wonderfully written! I'll be going to check out Micah's story when a get a chance, too. I have no doubt that it'll be great. _ Siese |
![]() ![]() ![]() I died a little inside... Okay, Slightly exaggerating- I had one or two tears xD Poor Addie...His parents deserve it though. I hope they live on the street...or under a sewer! please update sooN! |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is a very good chapter its sad ( :'( ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG! that was so sweet, adorable. fantastic...seriously...i've waited for a long time for this and this was just amazing...but what are addies parents reaction? :D:D i loved it seriously...oh and sorry for not reviewing it's just that i dont get alerts i dont know why so i have to come back every few weeks to see if there are new chapters...very good work i hope u write some more :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow...that was intense...really intense...(off to read next chapter..:P) |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow, your story is nice, even though it only exists of drabbles it is easy to follow :) I'll definitely read more of your work :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved the last two updates... 21 baby was ace. I loved how they came out to everyone. Addie and Tria are so much fun to read. Thanx for sharing x |
![]() ![]() ![]() this keeps getting better id love to be ur beta if u want |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is beautiful ~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lol. Just started reading this story and I must say I'm hooked. I love Addison and Tria's relationship. Even the ups and downs. These drabbles are cute. And I hope Micah shows up more because he seems like a character you can really play with. If you need a beta or someone to bounce idea's I could give it a shot if you want. Never done it before but I want to help a good writer. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah, you'd better write a sequel or I'll cry! I love it Well explained, well written, just, mah Keep writing! |