|Reviews for Arrogant, Hot, Rich Boys|
| Ally Cat chapter 1 . 11/11/2014
I found this one-shot confusing. I was confused about who was talking, where they were etc. More details would be nice- that could be how we understand who the people are. I at first thought it was two woman talking.
| Revamp chapter 1 . 10/10/2013
This was sexy, fun and nicely written. I don't have much to say about criticism, considering the length is so short. I suppose my criticism would be that you lack certain descriptions such as thoughts and how the unnamed friend looked, other than being "hot". There are a few minor details that could be expanded such as her thoughts, but overall it's a nice little snippet.
| Kaliya14 chapter 1 . 3/24/2013
I only pushed this button bcuz i like buttons but the story is cute too
| heal me forever chapter 1 . 9/16/2012
DIS IS COOL I LIKE IT :) SUPER CUTE ATTEMPT
| theKnobblyKneedWriter chapter 1 . 5/18/2012
I love this
| Kbt chapter 1 . 1/3/2012
Omg words cannot even form sentences to tell you how amazing this is
| Adelle chapter 1 . 4/20/2011
It would've been much cuter if it was Logan she was talking to. I loved it though, awesome story!
| Stephyb14 chapter 1 . 2/14/2011
I like it but it needed to be longer plus you try to use words like 'explained', 'questioned', 'accused'. Words like that instead of he said she said. It works better
| thefaultinourpatronus chapter 1 . 2/5/2011
It wasn't confusing at all! Really unusual story, but I like it all the same. The last dialog is cool, where she says she's changing her type. I think it could use dialog tags though, generally. More than 'she said' and 'he said', that is. Otherwise, great oneshot :)
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| Brown-Eyed Chocoholic chapter 1 . 2/3/2011
Yes, the review button does look very pretty right now. :P
I loved this! I figured out who was speaking what. I think it's great without the "she said" and "he said." Makes the story more interesting.
I sort of thought that it was Logan. Oh well. xD
Gah, why is he unnamed? His name must be... Bob...
| QuickSilverSand chapter 1 . 1/20/2011
loved it! it was so hot! arrogant rich boys are so overrated! i liked both the leads in the story! please write more like this!
| Warrior-Princess06 chapter 1 . 12/31/2010
'Simple but Great.! :) Love it.! :))
| Midnight113 chapter 1 . 10/1/2010
I like how you wrote this, it was simple and sweet. Good work!
| dancing-in-the-silverain chapter 1 . 9/18/2010
You could put his speech in bold or something...
It was good :D
| WishBlade chapter 1 . 4/18/2010
Aww, that was pretty cute!