|Reviews for To Feel the Sun|
| Abbey chapter 9 . 1/22
Glad this story isn't too much of a cliche.
I liked the ending...although I feel bad for Simon. Unless you turn him into a jerk. But for now, I feel bad for him.
| Abbey chapter 7 . 1/22
Jonah at the beginning was hilarious. And the speakeasy restaurant sounds amazing.
I noticed some (minor) typos throughout the story (at least in the chapters I read so far), and you should change all the 'could care less' phrases into 'couldn't care less.'
I haven't pointed out the typos specifically because I'm just bulldozing through the story, haha.
| Wickedforlife chapter 3 . 1/19
OMG THE KRISTEN CHENIWHICH THING! Thank you that just made my week!
| daisukiklove chapter 19 . 12/17/2013
Wife?! EeeeeekI never want this story to end3 I love it
| daisukiklove chapter 14 . 12/17/2013
Soooo intense... I love Jonah more than ever!
| daisukiklove chapter 13 . 12/17/2013
That fucking bastard!
| daisukiklove chapter 11 . 12/17/2013
I'm starting to steer towards the ship-ment of Gracie & Jonah. Would make the cutest couple (in my opinion) he so gets her
| daisukiklove chapter 8 . 12/17/2013
Ooh! Jonah's got a date?! He's soooo in love with Grace
| daisukiklove chapter 4 . 12/17/2013
Is this all of Carlin's use? Not saying its bad just wondering
| Noellesco chapter 19 . 12/6/2013
Thank you for this. This was really adorable and asdkfjalskdfja. I love Jonah and Grace, and somehow, you really made me regret not studying Law (I chose Business Management instead). xD I don't know but you just have me speechless and I'm utterly lost for words. Normally, I would have a few bones to pick with an author at the end but this was amazing. Absolutely floored. Thank you, once again.
Just a small note... On chapter six, Jonah actually calls Grace 'Gracie'. I'm not sure if you meant that, hahaha. Here: " "Well, I couldn't have done it without Gracie," Jonah said. He smiled slightly at me, but turned away when Simon spoke up. " ;)
| Anon chapter 13 . 11/11/2013
Ay yoo while I use all my precious time on this ridiculously hilarious story, I just want to let you know about a teeny weeny typo up in a paragraph where Carlin tells Gracie, "You're always going to hurt somebody in relationships that don't work out" and then it says Simon does something with a spatula but im pretttyyy suurreee we still talkin bout Carlin here u dig?
haha hope it helps :)
| Dominique Diane chapter 19 . 9/29/2013
I cried. I cried when Jonah told Grace he was in loved with her. It was just so beautiful and sweet it broke my heart because, God! Every woman in earth would want that! Ahh, I was so happy when she got rid of Simon the asshole, really. Oh my freaking God, I can't still believe how wonderful and fantastic this story was really. I might as well just cry while writing this review. I can easily said this story got straight to my heart. It was real, it wasn't just fantasy, that's why I love it. It's not like all my favourite stories that have something supernatural or excessive action or even epic and obsessive love. No, this was real, this could easily be a real love experience of the writer. This story motivates me to keep writing, to keep with my ambitions in a way no other story had, and I don't even know why. While reading it for almost 3 hours, with read and tired eyes (Its 2:00 am in m Country) I couldn't stop smiling, biting my lip real hard to stop giggling and putting my covers over my head in a child fashion. Like I said (or wrote) before, this motivates me to do great things with my life because this story aside from entertaining me gave a lesson about love and expectations "To love and be loved is to feel the sun from both sides. " and teach me that sometimes we have everything planned in life and in a single heartbeat everything can be screwed over, that many things we have in a pedestal are just wrong and some ideas we hold tight to not let go are bad for us. I thank you for opening my teenage eyes for me. Thank you and congratulations for such a awesome story.
| genuisgina chapter 14 . 9/24/2013
Finally some real feelings. This is more like it.
| genuisgina chapter 12 . 9/24/2013
I dont like grace much. She's too bossy. My fav is sarah i think she's really cool.
| FallenMelancholic chapter 20 . 8/14/2013
How could you have left out the wedding details! It's honestly my first thought after reading the epilogue. I would have loved to know how Jonah proposed. :3 oh how I wish I have my own Jonah..
I've read 100 Love Letters beforehand and I couldn't help but compare TFtS to it. I wasn't impressed with the first few chapters of TFtS. I'm no critic, but I felt that there was a more mature and polished tone in the way you wrote 100LL. Maybe it's just the perspective, I don't know. Or just that you've improved. But what I know is that you're so good in creating and personifying characters that I'm sure you can pull off ANY story. And also, you know how to keep us on toes. Seriously, you're so good. This is gold for us picky readers. ü