Reviews for The Immortal Strain |
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![]() ![]() ![]() *sigh* Such a wonderful happy ending! _ I love this tory and now I understand the title. _ Gotta say though, this could SO be expanded into a novel length story. There's so much here. Galan's life before he became who he was. Asher's life. Sarah/Azaelee's life before. Brenden's life. So much could be explored. Plus-they have forever now I would love to know what happens to Sarah and Brendan. _ But no more plot bunnies right? You have enough on your plate. _ Good job on this story! I loved it! _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Huh. Brendan is going to become an enemy to the reapers if he is allowed to continue on his path and Galan wants Azaelee to kill him? Why? I hope that yo finish editing the fina chapter soon so that I can find out what exacty is going on and what Azaelee is going to do. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i already reviewed chapter 1 so sorry if this sounds repetitive but this chapter was great i love how the story sucks you in and i really like the characters please finish chapter 3 fast because its a great story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh yeah. I loved this chapter too. _ Question were answered more more questions were raised. Brenden survived two more brushes with death. Why? I have a theory. He's a reaper only he doesn't know that he's a reaper because-oh I dunno he doesn't want to be one- Am I close or way far off? Either way I guess we'll find out when you update the next chapter. Please do so soon. _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love the story and the writings pretty awesome to the only thing i dont like is the use of second person |
![]() ![]() ![]() *first reviewer dance* Okay, so I so love the premise. And there are so many questions that have yet to be answered. Why did this Brendan escape dying? How did Azaelee become a reaper? Hmm...guess we'll have to wait till chapter two. Hope you update soon! |