Reviews for Please Don't Feed The Birds |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Aw, is it finished? I give it five out of five! :D I loved it. A really nice story, well thought, well written ... well done! Yet so sad. I did have a feeling that Chris died at the train station, or is that just me? Oh well. Hehe. XD And, one more thing before I forget: I really like the title, having read the story. I dunno why, it just kind of fits, y'know? :P |
![]() ![]() ![]() so, what really has happened to Chris? |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is really good, I like the change in POV. The story line doesn't seem very developed yet though. |
![]() ![]() ![]() yet another intense chapter. good job. my brother's name is chris. i havn't seen him in over three weeks. every time i read a new chapter i get kinda scared. but then i go to myspace and he's there. alive and healthy. ta ta peace love happiness |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really do like this story, how Chris is connected to everyone in one way or another. Keep up the great work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() woah. that's sad. i'm waiting for the next chapter. peace love happiness |
![]() ![]() ![]() So sad, but beautifully written. Well, well done! |