Aw, is it finished? I give it five out of five! :D I loved it. A really nice story, well thought, well written ... well done! Yet so sad.

I did have a feeling that Chris died at the train station, or is that just me? Oh well. Hehe. XD

And, one more thing before I forget: I really like the title, having read the story. I dunno why, it just kind of fits, y'know? :P

so, what really has happened to Chris?

This is really good, I like the change in POV. The story line doesn't seem very developed yet though.

yet another intense chapter. good job. my brother's name is chris. i havn't seen him in over three weeks. every time i read a new chapter i get kinda scared. but then i go to myspace and he's there. alive and healthy. ta ta

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I really do like this story, how Chris is connected to everyone in one way or another. Keep up the great work.

woah. that's sad. i'm waiting for the next chapter.

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So sad, but beautifully written. Well, well done!